List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Ваша відповідь містить багато заповнювачів ("umm"), що знижує природність мовлення. Також речення іноді не зовсім чіткі, наприклад, "spend too much money that I accept" звучить незрозуміло. Спробуйте давати більш чіткі, лаконічні відповіді без зайвих повторів і заповнювачів.

例: Yes, I usually make a list when I go grocery shopping because it helps me avoid buying unnecessary items and saves money.

提案: Ваша відповідь містить повтори і деякі граматичні помилки (наприклад, "a lot of thing" замість "a lot of things"). Намагайтеся уникати повторів і використовувати правильну граматику, а також структурувати відповідь більш логічно.

例: Yes, I usually make a To-Do list because without it, I tend to procrastinate and waste time. The list helps me stay organized and productive.

提案: Ваша відповідь не зовсім логічна і містить помилки у використанні займенників ("I want" замість "they want"). Також речення складно зрозуміти через відсутність чіткої структури. Спробуйте давати більш конкретні і логічні пояснення з правильним використанням займенників.

例: Some people dislike making lists because they prefer to have more freedom during their free time. They feel that strict schedules limit their ability to relax or choose activities spontaneously.

提案: Ваша відповідь переривається і не закінчується, що знижує її ефективність. Також багато заповнювачів "umm". Намагайтеся давати повні, чіткі відповіді з логічною структурою і без зайвих пауз.

例: It depends on the time of day. In the evening, I prefer making lists on my phone because it's convenient. However, in the morning, I like writing on paper since I can keep it nearby as a reminder.

× Umm, mostly I do a list, especially when I go to the grocery shop 'cause, umm, when I don't do this, I buy a lot of things that I don't need and spend too much money that I accept.

✓ Umm, mostly I make a list, especially when I go to the grocery shop 'cause, umm, when I don't do this, I buy a lot of things that I don't need and spend too much money than I expect.

The phrase 'do a list' is incorrect because 'list' is a countable noun and the correct verb collocation is 'make a list'. Also, 'spend too much money that I accept' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'spend too much money than I expect' to express exceeding an expected amount.

× Umm, yeah, I do it usually 'cause when I don't have this To Do List, I can wake up at 10 AM and then spend 2 hours lying on the bed and just think, oh, I need to do a lot of thing, but I will do it later and do nothing.

✓ Umm, yeah, I do it usually 'cause when I don't have this To Do List, I can wake up at 10 AM and then spend 2 hours lying on the bed and just think, oh, I need to do a lot of things, but I will do it later and do nothing.

The phrase 'a lot of thing' is incorrect because 'thing' should be plural here. The correct phrase is 'a lot of things' to indicate multiple items or tasks.

× Umm, maybe because I want to have more freedom on their free time 'cause mostly if you have a work schedule you can't rewrite it.

✓ Umm, maybe because they want to have more freedom in their free time 'cause mostly if you have a work schedule you can't rewrite it.

The pronoun 'I' is incorrectly used when referring to 'some people'. The correct pronoun is 'they' to match the subject 'some people'. Also, 'on their free time' should be 'in their free time' (see next correction).

× Umm, maybe because I want to have more freedom on their free time 'cause mostly if you have a work schedule you can't rewrite it.

✓ Umm, maybe because they want to have more freedom in their free time 'cause mostly if you have a work schedule you can't rewrite it.

The preposition 'on' is incorrect with 'free time'. The correct preposition is 'in' to express being within a period of free time.

× But if it's on the weekends and you can choose like doing some things or just relax and chill out, most people choose.

✓ But if it's on the weekends and you can choose to do some things or just relax and chill out, most people choose that.

The phrase 'choose like doing some things' is incorrect. The correct structure is 'choose to do some things'. Also, the sentence ends abruptly; adding 'that' clarifies the choice.

× Uh, it depends on the time when I do this list.

✓ Uh, it depends on the time when I make this list.

'Do this list' is incorrect because 'list' is a countable noun and the correct verb collocation is 'make a list'.

× But if I write it on the morning, I prefer writing on the paper 'cause I don't know, it just sits under my.

✓ But if I write it in the morning, I prefer writing on paper 'cause I don't know, it just sits under mine.

The preposition 'on the morning' is incorrect; it should be 'in the morning'. Also, 'on the paper' is better as 'on paper'. The sentence ends abruptly with 'under my'; it should be 'under mine' to complete the thought.