List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答不够连贯，存在语法错误和重复，建议简化句子结构，避免重复表达，并且直接回答问题。

例: No, I usually don't make a list when I shop. I just buy things when I realize I need them and then go home.

提案: 回答中语法不够准确，时态使用不当，建议使用正确的时态和更清晰的表达，同时增加连接词使句子更流畅。

例: Since I am a student, I make a study list when I have a big exam, like midterms, which cover many subjects. This helps me prepare effectively.

提案: 回答中表达不够清晰，存在重复和语法错误，建议简化句子，使用更准确的词汇，并用连接词使逻辑更清楚。

例: Some people dislike making lists because they feel pressured to complete all tasks. If they can't finish, they may feel stressed or procrastinate.

提案: 回答不完整且有重复，建议完整表达观点，避免重复词汇，并使用连接词使句子更连贯。

例: I prefer to use both paper and my phone for lists. I use paper during midterm exams to organize subjects clearly, and I use my phone to track daily habits I want to develop.

× No, actually I go to the shop when I like see think I need something and and then if I buy, finish buying that thing, I will just go straight back to home. Yeah.

✓ No, actually I go to the shop when I think I need something, and then if I buy and finish buying that thing, I will just go straight back home. Yeah.

句子中存在多余的词汇（like, see）导致语义混乱，应删除。'go straight back to home'中，'home'前不需要介词'to'，应直接用'go straight back home'。此外，保持现在时态一致。

× Umm since I'm student I will make list if I had a huge exam like midterm exam which covers a lot of subjects and I will do my study list for preparing my exams.

✓ Umm since I'm a student, I will make a list if I have a huge exam like a midterm exam which covers a lot of subjects, and I will make my study list to prepare for my exams.

缺少冠词'a'，'student'和'list'均为可数名词，前面应加冠词。'had'应改为现在时'have'以符合上下文时态。'do my study list for preparing my exams'表达不自然，改为'make my study list to prepare for my exams'更准确。

× I mean making lists will make people think like I have to do done this whole thing and finish it.

✓ I mean making lists will make people think like they have to get this whole thing done and finish it.

句中'I have to do done'结构错误，且主语应与前文'people'一致，故用'they'。'do done'应改为'get done'或'finish'。

× And if if it doesn't, if he or she doesn't finish it, I mean they will have the stress of finishing it or just procrastinating.

✓ And if it doesn't, if he or she doesn't finish it, I mean they will feel stressed about finishing it or just procrastinate.

'have the stress'表达不自然，改为'feel stressed'更符合英语习惯。'procrastinating'应与前文动词形式一致，改为'procrastinate'。

× Actually, I will do both. For the paper, I will prepare it when it's midterm exams because that will help me organize clearly when when it comes to midterms subjects.

✓ Actually, I will do both. For paper, I will prepare it when it's midterm exams because that will help me organize clearly when it comes to midterm subjects.

'For the paper'中'the'可省略，'midterms subjects'应为'midterm subjects'，形容词形式修饰名词。

× And for the phones, I will definitely write down my habits. So like every day I learn new habits, for example, or.

✓ And for the phone, I will definitely write down my habits. For example, every day I learn new habits.

'phones'应为单数'the phone'，指手机。句子末尾不完整，应补充完整表达。