List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答中时态使用不准确，应该用现在时态描述习惯性动作。此外，句子结构有些混乱，重复使用了“I like”，建议简化表达并注意语法。

例: Yes, I often make a list when I go shopping because it helps me stay organized and remember what items I need to buy.

提案: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不够清晰。建议使用完整句子，明确说明制作清单的目的和效果，并避免口语化的表达。

例: I usually make lists to complete my assignments or prepare presentations. However, sometimes the list doesn't work well because I feel lazy.

提案: 回答不完整，句子中断且逻辑不清晰。建议完整表达观点，使用连接词使句子连贯，并具体说明原因。

例: I think some people dislike making lists because they find them time-consuming and not always helpful.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和表达不自然的问题。建议简化句子结构，注意介词和时态的正确使用，使表达更流畅。

例: I prefer making lists on my smartphone because there are many apps that help me create clear and quick lists, and I can check them anytime and anywhere.

× Yes, I often make a list when I was shopping.

✓ Yes, I often make a list when I am shopping.

这里的时间状语是一般现在时的习惯动作，不能用过去时"was shopping"，应使用一般现在时"am shopping"。

× What I like the most about list is it can help me stay organized and I can remember what items should I bought.

✓ What I like the most about lists is that they can help me stay organized and I can remember what items I should buy.

"list"应为复数形式"lists"，因为泛指。"should I bought"时态错误，正确为"I should buy"，动词用原形。

× So I like I like make a list.

✓ So I like to make a list.

缺少不定式"to"，"like"后应接动词不定式。

× As I usually make a list for my work like achieve my assignment or my presentation.

✓ I usually make a list for my work like achieving my assignments or my presentations.

"achieve"应使用动名词形式"achieving"，且"assignment"和"presentation"应使用复数形式。

× Actually sometimes the list is not work because I'm so lazy.

✓ Actually, sometimes the list does not work because I'm so lazy.

"list is not work"结构错误，应使用"does not work"。

× Well, I think the reason why some people don't like making lists is that sometimes lists are not very useful and but you need to spend more time to think about it and.

✓ Well, I think the reason why some people don't like making lists is that sometimes lists are not very useful, and you need to spend more time thinking about them.

"and but"连词重复，应去掉其一。"think about it and"句子不完整，改为"thinking about them"更通顺。

× I prefer to make a list on my smartphone because in nowadays there are so many apps can help us to make a list very clearly and quickly and I can check the list in everywhere in every time.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my smartphone because nowadays there are so many apps that can help us make lists very clearly and quickly, and I can check the list everywhere at any time.

"in nowadays"错误，应为"nowadays"。"can help us to make"中"to"可省略。"in everywhere"错误，应为"everywhere"。"in every time"错误，应为"at any time"。