List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答较为自然，但有些语法错误和重复表达，如“didn't I won't forget”应简化为“won't forget”。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并使用更准确的时态。

例: It depends on the situation. Sometimes I make a list to ensure I don't forget important items, which helps me organize my shopping cart. However, other times I just browse with friends without making a list.

提案: 回答内容丰富，但表达中有些用词不当，如“crazy about”在正式场合不太合适，且“gain a fulfillment”应为“feel fulfilled”。建议使用更正式和准确的表达。

例: Yes, I really like making lists. They give me a sense of achievement and help me work more efficiently. When I complete tasks on my list, I feel very fulfilled.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不够流畅，如“some many reasons”应为“many reasons”，“really sure”应为“are sure”。建议注意语法准确性，并使用连接词使表达更连贯。

例: There are many reasons. For example, some people trust their memory and are sure they can remember important things. Therefore, they don't feel the need to make lists and prefer to keep everything in mind.

提案: 回答较好，但有些表达重复，如“more convenient”出现两次。建议使用多样化的词汇和连接词，使表达更自然流畅。

例: I prefer making lists on my phone because it's easier to edit and rearrange tasks. Moreover, I can share my plans with friends, which makes it very flexible and practical.

× Sometimes I may make a list to make sure that I didn't I won't forget something important.

✓ Sometimes I may make a list to make sure that I won't forget something important.

句中出现了两个模态动词“didn't”和“won't”，这是错误的用法。应只使用“won't”表示将来不会忘记。

× Sometimes I wouldn't make a list because I just want to hang out with friends or just browsing the products in the shop.

✓ Sometimes I wouldn't make a list because I just want to hang out with friends or just browse the products in the shop.

动词“browsing”前缺少助动词，正确用法是动词原形“browse”，因为前面有“just”表示动作。

× There are some many reasons.

✓ There are so many reasons.

“some many”是错误的量词搭配，应使用“so many”表示“很多”。

× They may believe their own memories.

✓ They may believe in their own memories.

动词“believe”后面需要介词“in”来表示相信某事物。

× They really sure that they can memorize all the important things and categorize the different parts of things in their mind.

✓ They are really sure that they can memorize all the important things and categorize the different parts of things in their mind.

句中缺少系动词“are”，导致句子结构不完整。

× So they don't need to make this.

✓ So they don't need to make it.

“this”用法不当，指代不明确，应使用“it”指代前文提到的“list”。

× Instead of that they can just bear in mind.

✓ Instead of that, they can just bear it in mind.

短语“bear in mind”需要宾语，缺少“it”；另外“Instead of that”后应加逗号。

× I can also share my plans to my friends through my phone.

✓ I can also share my plans with my friends through my phone.

动词“share”后应接介词“with”表示分享给某人，而非“to”。