List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答很自然且表達了個人感受，但有些重複和口語填充詞（如 "you know"）影響流暢度。建議在回答時避免重複，並嘗試用更精簡的句子表達相同意思。

例: No, I don't usually make a shopping list because I prefer to enjoy my time at the mall with friends without restrictions. I like to browse freely and buy what catches my eye without planning too much.

提案: 你的回答結構清晰，但句子稍顯冗長且部分表達不夠自然。建議使用連接詞使句子更流暢，並嘗試用更地道的表達方式。

例: Yes, I always make a list for my work because it helps me clearly understand my tasks. This way, I can easily track my progress and ensure that I complete everything on time.

提案: 你的回答有邏輯，但用詞和句型較簡單，且部分句子結構不夠自然。建議使用更多連接詞和多樣詞彙來豐富內容。

例: I think some people dislike making lists because they value freedom and flexibility. They prefer not to be restricted by a fixed plan, which allows them to decide their activities spontaneously.

提案: 你的回答表達了個人偏好，但句子結構稍顯重複且不夠精簡。建議簡化句子並使用更自然的連接詞。

例: Although smartphones are convenient and widely used for note-taking, I prefer making lists on paper because I enjoy the tactile feeling of writing things down.

× I would say that those kind of people just like to be free and be flexible.

✓ I would say that those kinds of people just like to be free and be flexible.

The phrase 'those kind of people' is incorrect because 'those' is plural and should be followed by the plural form 'kinds' to agree in number. The correct phrase is 'those kinds of people'. This is a singular and plural agreement issue.

× I think that is really convenient for me to see through a list to make sure that I finish all of my jobs.

✓ I think that it is really convenient for me to look through a list to make sure that I finish all of my jobs.

The phrase 'see through a list' is incorrect because 'see through' means to perceive the truth or to detect deception. The correct preposition and verb combination here is 'look through a list', meaning to examine or review the list. This is an incorrect use of prepositions issue.

× Even though that smartphone is really convenient to use, and most of the people use their convenient smartphone to write down notes, I still prefer using a paper to make a list for me.

✓ Even though smartphones are really convenient to use, and most people use their smartphones to write down notes, I still prefer using paper to make a list for myself.

There are several pronoun and article issues here: 'that smartphone' should be plural 'smartphones' to generalize; 'most of the people' should be 'most people' without 'of'; 'their convenient smartphone' should be 'their smartphones' to match plural; 'using a paper' should be 'using paper' because 'paper' is uncountable here; 'for me' should be 'for myself' to correctly use reflexive pronoun. These are incorrect use of pronouns and articles issues.