List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答较为简单，缺少连贯的连接词和具体细节。建议在回答中使用连接词如“because”或“so”，并具体说明列清单如何帮助你购物。

例: Yes, I always make a list when I shop because it helps me stay organized and ensures I don't forget any important items.

提案: 句子结构不够自然，语法错误较多。建议简化句子，使用连接词如“because”来表达原因，并注意主谓一致。

例: Yes, I make a list for my work because I have many tasks to complete, and it helps me manage my time effectively.

提案: 表达不够自然，语法和用词错误较多。建议使用更准确的词汇，如“complicated”代替“complex things”，并避免重复。

例: I think some people dislike making lists because they find it complicated and prefer to keep things simple.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清的问题，如“reverse everything”用词不当。建议使用更准确的表达，并保持句子简洁。

例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it is convenient and helps me keep track of my tasks and completed items easily.

× so make a list is a very convenient way for me to finish these things and it really work very well.

✓ so making a list is a very convenient way for me to finish these things and it really works very well.

这里'so make a list'中的'make'应改为动名词'making'，因为它作为主语使用。'work'应改为'works'，因为主语是单数第三人称。

× so make a list is a very convenient way for me to finish these things and it really work very well.

✓ so making a list is a very convenient way for me to finish these things and it really works very well.

'make'作为主语时应使用动名词形式'making'。

× maybe because they think making a list is very complex things and they are very lazy, so they don't want to make a list to organize other things.

✓ maybe because they think making a list is a very complex thing and they are very lazy, so they don't want to make a list to organize other things.

'complex things'应改为单数形式'a very complex thing'，因为这里指的是一个整体的概念。

× Well, I prefer to make a list by cell phone.

✓ Well, I prefer to make a list on my cell phone.

习惯用法中，'make a list on my cell phone'更自然，'by cell phone'不合适。

× You know, that is very convenient for me to reverse everything in my cell phone and I can take them to remind myself what I need to do next and what has been accomplished in time and and.

✓ You know, it is very convenient for me to review everything on my cell phone and I can use it to remind myself what I need to do next and what has been accomplished on time.

'that'应改为'it'指代前文；'reverse'应为'review'；'in my cell phone'应为'on my cell phone'；'take them'不合适，应改为'use it'；'in time and and'重复且用词错误，应为'on time'。