List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答较自然且内容相关，但句子结构稍显复杂且有些冗长。建议简化句子结构，避免重复表达，同时增加连接词使表达更连贯。

例: No, I usually don't make a shopping list because I find it hard to plan everything in advance. Instead, I prefer to buy whatever I want at the supermarket. This way, I can choose fresh products or take advantage of special offers that catch my attention.

提案: 回答不够完整且语法错误较多，表达不够清晰。建议直接回答问题，使用完整句子，并适当使用连接词使表达更流畅。

例: No, I don't usually make a list for my work because I find it challenging. However, my teacher encourages me to do so because it helps organize tasks and know what to do next.

提案: 回答内容有一定逻辑，但表达不够准确，存在语法错误。建议使用更准确的词汇和句式，避免重复，并用连接词增强连贯性。

例: Some people don't like making lists because they think it wastes time. Also, they prefer to manage their time efficiently without strict plans, which they find inconvenient.

提案: 回答表达基本清楚，但有语法错误和重复。建议注意语法准确性，简化表达，并使用连接词使句子更流畅。

例: I prefer to make a list on my phone because it is more convenient. For example, I can set alarms to remind me when to do tasks, which helps me save time.

× I prefer make a list on my phone because I think it's more convenient.

✓ I prefer making a list on my phone because I think it's more convenient.

动词prefer后面应接动名词形式making，而不是动词原形make。

× our teacher always encourage me to do these things because it can tell you what you need to do next.

✓ our teacher always encourages me to do these things because it can tell you what you need to do next.

主语our teacher是第三人称单数，谓语动词应加-s，改为encourages。

× Also, when I go to the supermarket, I prefer to buy things whatever I want rather than strictly for the list.

✓ Also, when I go to the supermarket, I prefer to buy whatever I want rather than strictly following the list.

句中'prefer to buy things whatever I want'结构不正确，应改为'prefer to buy whatever I want'，去掉多余的things。

× But making a list it will be challenging for them and also it will make them do something strictly and it's inconvenient.

✓ But making a list will be challenging for them and also it will make them do things strictly, which is inconvenient.

句中'it will be challenging'前多余it，应去掉；'do something strictly'表达不自然，改为'do things strictly'更合适。

× Maybe you can set some alarms and when you should do these things the the clock and the arm will tell you you should do these things and it will help you save more time.

✓ Maybe you can set some alarms, and when you should do these things, the clock and the alarm will tell you, which will help you save more time.

句中'the arm'应为'the alarm'，且句子缺少逗号分隔，改正后更通顺。

× No, actually because I think it's challenging for me, but our teacher always encourage me to do these things because it can tell you what you need to do next. But actually I don't usually do a list for my work and.

✓ No, actually I think it's challenging for me, but our teacher always encourages me to do these things because it can tell you what you need to do next. But actually, I don't usually make a list for my work.

句子结构混乱，去掉多余的because，调整动词形式encourages，去掉句尾多余的and，使句子完整。