List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Apni answer e kichu grammar error ache, ar sentence structure onek bar repeat hocche. Apnar uttor ke aro natural korte, simple ar clear sentence use korun, ar repetition koman. Apni ekta topic sentence diye start korun, tarpor specific karon bolun. Example: "Yes, I usually make a shopping list because I tend to forget items otherwise. This helps me stay organized and ensures I don't miss anything important."

例: Yes, I usually make a shopping list because I tend to forget items otherwise. This helps me stay organized and ensures I don't miss anything important.

提案: Apnar uttor incomplete ar kichu sentence structure vul ache. Apni proshner shathe direct answer din, ar porer sentence gulo logically link korun. Apni ekta clear topic sentence den, tarpor supporting details ar karon bolun. Example: "Yes, I always make a to-do list at work. It helps me prioritize tasks and complete them efficiently."

例: Yes, I always make a to-do list at work. It helps me prioritize tasks and complete them efficiently.

提案: Apnar uttor proshner shathe mil nai, karon apni bolsen onek manush list korte bhalobashen, kintu proshno chilo keno kichu manush list korte bhalobashen na. Apni proshner shathe mil rekhe uttor din, ar sentence gulo clear ar shothik bhabe structure korun. Example: "Some people don't like making lists because they find it time-consuming or prefer to remember tasks mentally."

例: Some people don't like making lists because they find it time-consuming or prefer to remember tasks mentally.

提案: Apnar uttor bhalo, kintu kichu grammar ar word repetition ache. Apni sentence gulo aro shothik ar natural korte paren. Apni linking words use kore uttor ke aro coherent korte paren. Example: "I prefer making lists on my phone because it's convenient and I always have it with me. This way, I can easily check and update my tasks anytime."

例: I prefer making lists on my phone because it's convenient and I always have it with me. This way, I can easily check and update my tasks anytime.

× Yes, I usually make a list when I go, when I going for shopping, when I'm going for shopping because I had a problem of forgetting different things.

✓ Yes, I usually make a list when I go shopping, when I'm going shopping because I have a problem with forgetting different things.

The phrase 'when I going for shopping' is incorrect because the verb 'go' needs to be followed by the '-ing' form only when used with 'am/is/are'. The correct form is 'when I am going shopping' or simply 'when I go shopping'. Also, 'had' should be 'have' to match the present tense context. Use 'have a problem with' instead of 'had a problem of'.

× That's why I must have to prepare a list before going to shopping.

✓ That's why I must prepare a list before going shopping.

The phrase 'must have to' is redundant because both 'must' and 'have to' express necessity. Use either 'must' or 'have to' but not both together. Also, 'going to shopping' should be 'going shopping'.

× Yes, I make a list for my work in my office and it is my first job after entering the office to make A to do list and I do all the jobs according to the To Do List and it actually it works very well because before we.

✓ Yes, I make a list for my work in my office and it is my first job after entering the office to make a to-do list and I do all the jobs according to the to-do list and it actually works very well because before we...

The article 'A' should be lowercase 'a' as it is in the middle of the sentence. 'To do list' should be hyphenated as 'to-do list'. Also, 'it actually it works' has a redundant 'it'. The sentence is incomplete but corrected up to the given part.

× Many people like making list because they were they are more organized and they they always have plan plan regarding their work and this will help them to do all the all the activities accordingly and finish the job timely.

✓ Many people like making lists because they are more organized and they always have plans regarding their work and this helps them to do all the activities accordingly and finish the job on time.

'List' should be plural 'lists' because it refers to the general activity. 'Plan plan' is a repetition; use 'plans'. 'Were they are' is incorrect; use 'are'. 'Finish the job timely' should be 'finish the job on time' for correct expression.

× I actually prefer my phone for for doing the least, because as nowadays it is quite impossible to keep notebook or to keep paper notebook always with me.

✓ I actually prefer my phone for doing the list, because nowadays it is quite impossible to always keep a notebook or paper notebook with me.

The phrase 'for for doing the least' has a repeated 'for' and 'least' should be 'list'. 'Keep notebook' needs an article 'a'. 'Always with me' should be 'with me always' or 'always with me' but better placed after 'keep'.

× For this reason I always prepare my To Do List in my phone and it is always with me and whenever I want I can see it and do it accordingly.

✓ For this reason, I always prepare my to-do list on my phone and it is always with me, so whenever I want, I can see it and do it accordingly.

The preposition 'in' should be 'on' when referring to using a phone. Added commas for clarity. 'To Do List' should be 'to-do list'.