List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答时语言不够自然，表达有些重复和不连贯。建议简化句子结构，避免重复表达，并使用更地道的表达方式。

例: Yes, I usually make a shopping list on my phone or on paper because I tend to forget things easily.

提案: 回答结构不完整，第二句语法错误且表达不清晰。建议使用完整句子，明确说明做清单的目的，并使用连接词使表达更流畅。

例: Yes, I usually make a list on paper for my work because it helps me remember the tasks I need to complete.

提案: 回答内容不够具体，语法错误较多，逻辑不清晰。建议明确表达原因，使用正确的时态和句式，并增加具体细节。

例: I think some people dislike making lists because their lives are very busy, and they find it hard to keep track of everything.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达重复。建议注意动词形式，避免重复表达，并使用更自然的表达方式。

例: I prefer making lists on my phone because it's more convenient and I don't like carrying paper around.

× I prefer make a list on my phone rather than on paper because nowadays the smartphone is more convenient than paper and I don't like to take a paper.

✓ I prefer making a list on my phone rather than on paper because nowadays the smartphone is more convenient than paper and I don't like to take a paper.

动词prefer后面应接动名词形式making，而不是动词原形make。

× I usually draw the list down on the phone or on a paper.

✓ I usually write the list down on my phone or on a piece of paper.

动词draw通常不用于写列表，应该用write。'on the phone'应改为'on my phone'，'on a paper'应改为'on a piece of paper'。

× To recall the work what I do.

✓ To recall the work that I do.

句子缺少连接词that，导致结构不完整。

× I usually make a list for my work on the paper because it can help me.

✓ I usually make a list for my work on paper because it can help me.

'on the paper'应改为'on paper'，表示泛指纸张。

× I think life gets hectic, so many people will forget some important things to prevent these things happened.

✓ I think life gets hectic, so many people will forget some important things, which prevents these things from happening.

原句结构混乱，'to prevent these things happened'不符合语法，应改为'which prevents these things from happening'。