List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Answer deer "umm" gej davtaltai hereglehgui, iluu todorhoi, bogino sentence ashigla. Jishee ni, "Yes, I make a list when I shop because it helps me remember what to buy and avoid unnecessary purchases."

例: Yes, I make a list when I shop because it helps me remember what to buy and avoid unnecessary purchases.

提案: Urd ni "uh" bolon "umm" gej davtaltai hereglehgui, iluu todorhoi, bogino sentence ashigla. Link hiih ugiig hereglej, helberee saijruul. Jishee ni, "I usually make a list of daily tasks, but if it's not specific, I lose motivation and don't complete them."

例: I usually make a list of daily tasks, but if it's not specific, I lose motivation and don't complete them.

提案: Answer deer "So yeah" gej duusgahgui, iluu todorhoi, bogino sentence ashigla. Link hiih ugiig hereglej, helberee saijruul. Jishee ni, "Some people prefer lists because they like organization, while others find spontaneous actions more effective."

例: Some people prefer lists because they like organization, while others find spontaneous actions more effective.

提案: Answer deer "umm" gej davtaltai hereglehgui, iluu todorhoi, bogino sentence ashigla. Link hiih ugiig hereglej, helberee saijruul. Jishee ni, "I prefer making lists on my phone because it's convenient and always accessible, unlike paper lists."

例: I prefer making lists on my phone because it's convenient and always accessible, unlike paper lists.

× I find that making a list when I shop makes me more, umm, clear of what I'm gonna buy

✓ I find that making a list when I shop makes me more, umm, clear about what I'm going to buy

The phrase 'clear of' is incorrect; the correct preposition to use with 'clear' in this context is 'about'. This is a preposition usage error (ID 11). The sentence is in present tense and should maintain correct preposition usage for clarity.

× I don't buy things that I don't need and waste money

✓ I don't buy things that I don't need and don't waste money

The sentence implies two negative actions but only negates the first verb. To maintain parallel structure and clarity, 'don't' should be added before 'waste money'. This is a modal verb usage issue (ID 4).

× I was planning to do so

✓ I plan to do so

The sentence is about future intention, so present tense 'plan' is more appropriate than past tense 'was planning'. This is a past tense issue (ID 5).

× I usually do make a list for, uh, the things I'm going to do for the day

✓ I usually make a list of the things I'm going to do for the day

The correct preposition to use with 'list' is 'of', not 'for'. This is a preposition usage error (ID 11).

× I think it really correlates to someone's personality because some people like making lists, being organized, but others think that just doing something when they want to do it and doing it how they want to do it at the moment is more effective

✓ I think it really correlates with someone's personality because some people like making lists and being organized, but others think that just doing something when they want to and doing it how they want at the moment is more effective

The verb 'correlate' is followed by 'with', not 'to'. Also, the sentence structure is improved by adding 'and' between 'making lists' and 'being organized'. This is a preposition usage error (ID 11) and sentence structure error (ID 26).

× I've heard to make a list on my phone because I find that kind of inconvenient to take around the paper with me everywhere I go

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because I find it kind of inconvenient to carry paper with me everywhere I go

The phrase 'I've heard to make a list' is incorrect; 'I prefer to make a list' is appropriate. Also, 'take around the paper' is incorrect; 'carry paper' is correct. This involves modal verb usage (ID 4) and preposition usage (ID 11).

× So I just think making a list on my phone, umm, makes me more motivated to do it 'cause I can actually see it at all times

✓ So I just think making a list on my phone, umm, makes me more motivated to do it because I can actually see it at all times

The contraction ''cause' is informal and should be replaced with 'because' in formal speech. This is a sentence structure issue (ID 26).