List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答表达了观点，但语法和表达不够自然，存在冗余和错误。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并使用更地道的表达方式。

例: Yes, I like to make a shopping list because it helps me save money and time.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不够流畅的问题。建议注意动词形式和词汇搭配，使用连接词使句子更连贯。

例: Yes, I usually make a list at work because it reminds me of important tasks and helps improve my efficiency.

提案: 回答内容不够具体且表达混乱，有重复和不连贯的问题。建议明确表达观点，避免重复，并提供具体原因。

例: I think some people dislike making lists because they prefer to do things spontaneously and find lists restrictive.

提案: 回答较为自然，但“watch”用词不当，建议使用更合适的动词，并尝试丰富词汇。

例: I prefer making lists on my phone because it's convenient and I can check them anytime and anywhere.

× Yes, I enjoy making a list before I go to shop because I think it's an efficient way to avoid me to spend extra money and save me a lot of time.

✓ Yes, I enjoy making a list before I go shopping because I think it's an efficient way to avoid spending extra money and save a lot of time.

动词go后面接动名词形式shopping，而不是不定式to shop。avoid后面应接动名词形式spending，而不是不定式to spend。避免使用不定式结构，改为动名词形式更符合英语习惯。

× Yes, I usually make a list while working because I think it can not only remind me to do important things but also help me improve my working efficient.

✓ Yes, I usually make a list while working because I think it can not only remind me to do important things but also help me improve my working efficiency.

efficient是形容词，需用名词efficiency来表示“效率”。这里是名词用法错误，需改为名词形式。

× In my opinion I think they may be very lazy and they are casual person who who prefer who prefer doing things. Unexpectedly.

✓ In my opinion, I think they may be very lazy and they are casual people who prefer doing things unexpectedly.

句子结构混乱，重复使用了who prefer，且person应为复数people，unexpectedly应放在句尾修饰动词doing。需要调整句子结构，使其通顺且语法正确。

× I prefer to make a list on my phone because I think it's very convenient for me to remember important things and I can watch them anytime, anywhere.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because I think it's very convenient for me to remember important things and I can check them anytime, anywhere.

动词watch通常用于观看视频或电视，查看列表应使用check更合适。这里动词用法不当，需改为check。