List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答中有重复词汇和语法错误，表达不够自然。建议简洁明了地回答问题，并避免重复。

例: I rarely make a shopping list nowadays because I usually buy things spontaneously.

提案: 回答中有发音和词汇错误（如'lifts'应为'lists'，'vocation'应为'vacation'），且句子结构不清晰。建议使用正确词汇并清楚表达观点。

例: I often make lists for my work during my vacation, but sometimes I don't follow them strictly.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和重复，表达不够流畅。建议使用连词连接句子，使表达更自然。

例: Some people don't like making lists because they find it complicated and boring, which makes the task less enjoyable.

提案: 回答较为完整，但可以更简洁并使用更自然的表达。建议减少冗余，使用更地道的表达方式。

例: I prefer making lists on paper because I can stick them on the wall as reminders for tasks like reading or studying.

× Now when I when when I'm going to shopping, I seldom make some lists.

✓ Now when I'm going shopping, I seldom make any lists.

动词go后面接动名词形式，正确表达是'go shopping'，而不是'going to shopping'。此外，'some lists'在否定句中应使用'any lists'。

× Now when I when when I'm going to shopping, I seldom make some lists.

✓ Now when I'm going shopping, I seldom make any lists.

在否定句中，'some'应改为'any'，表示否定的量词使用。

× Actually, I often try to make some lifts for my work, I mean when I'm in the vocation, but it doesn't work all the time.

✓ Actually, I often try to make some lists for my work, I mean when I'm on vacation, but it doesn't work all the time.

'some lifts'应为'some lists'，且'vocation'应为'vacation'，表示假期。

× Actually, I often try to make some lifts for my work, I mean when I'm in the vocation, but it doesn't work all the time.

✓ Actually, I often try to make some lists for my work, I mean when I'm on vacation, but it doesn't work all the time.

'in the vocation'应改为'on vacation'，表示在假期期间。

× Maybe they think make making lists is a complicated and boring things to do.

✓ Maybe they think making lists is a complicated and boring thing to do.

'make making'重复，应去掉'make'。'things'应为单数'thing'，因为前面有形容词修饰。

× Maybe they think make making lists is a complicated and boring things to do.

✓ Maybe they think making lists is a complicated and boring thing to do.

'things'应改为单数'thing'，因为前面有形容词修饰，且指代单一动作。

× I prefer to make a list on paper because I can stick it on the wall to remind me of doing something like doing some reading or studying now.

✓ I prefer to make a list on paper because I can stick it on the wall to remind me to do something like reading or studying now.

'remind me of doing'应改为'remind me to do'，表示提醒去做某事。'doing some reading or studying'改为'reading or studying'更自然。