List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: A válaszodban fontos lenne egyértelműen és természetesen kifejezni a gondolatokat. Próbálj meg világos mondatokat alkotni, és kerüld a zavaros kifejezéseket, például "please keep me". Használj egyszerű, de pontos nyelvezetet, és adj meg konkrét okokat a lista készítésére.

例: Yes, I always make a shopping list because it helps me remember exactly what I need to buy and prevents me from forgetting important items.

提案: A válaszodban fontos a nyelvtani helyesség és a folyamatosság. Ügyelj az igeidők és a többes szám helyes használatára (pl. "it keeps me", "it helps me"). Használj kötőszavakat, hogy a mondatok összefüggőek legyenek, és adj konkrét példákat a lista előnyeiről.

例: Yes, I make a list for my work because it keeps me organized and helps me manage my schedule effectively, so I don't miss any important tasks.

提案: A válaszodban fontos a mondatszerkezet javítása és a világosabb kifejezés. Használj kötőszavakat, hogy a gondolatok logikusan kapcsolódjanak egymáshoz. Pontosítsd a véleményedet, például "they prefer flexibility" vagy "they don't want to be restricted by a list".

例: I think some people don't like making lists because they prefer to work according to their own timeline and don't want to be restricted by a fixed routine.

提案: A válaszod természetes és érthető, de javítható a folyamatosság és a szóhasználat. Használj változatos kötőszavakat, például "because", "so", "therefore". Kerüld az ismétléseket, és használj pontosabb kifejezéseket, például "more convenient" vagy "easier to manage".

例: I prefer to make a list on my phone because I can access it anytime and anywhere, which is very convenient and makes it easier to manage my tasks.

× Yes, I make a list when I do shopping because I think please keep me. Knowing how what things I wanted to buy, it keeps me.

✓ Yes, I make a list when I go shopping because I think it helps me. Knowing what things I want to buy keeps me focused.

The phrase 'do shopping' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'go shopping' (Grammar Problem Type ID:10). Also, 'please keep me' is unclear and likely a misuse of verb forms; it should be 'it helps me' to express the intended meaning. Additionally, 'Knowing how what things I wanted to buy' is grammatically incorrect and should be 'Knowing what things I want to buy' to maintain present tense and clarity.

× Does it work? Yes, I make a list to do my work because it keep me organized and it's helped me to maintain my schedules and my times organization.

✓ Does it work? Yes, I make a list to do my work because it keeps me organized and it helps me to maintain my schedule and manage my time.

The verb 'keep' should be in third person singular form 'keeps' to agree with the singular subject 'it' (Grammar Problem Type ID:2). 'It's helped me' is past tense and inconsistent with the present context; 'it helps me' is correct. Also, 'my times organization' is awkward; 'manage my time' is clearer and grammatically correct.

× It does helps for me to.

✓ It does help me too.

The auxiliary 'does' requires the base form of the verb, so 'helps' should be 'help' (Grammar Problem Type ID:10). Also, 'for me to' is incorrect here; 'me too' is the proper expression.

× I think some people don't make list because they like to do things based their own timeline and they don't like to maintain the routine and if they make a list they will think they will hook to that kind of list.

✓ I think some people don't make lists because they like to do things based on their own timeline and they don't like to maintain a routine. If they make a list, they think they will be tied to it.

The phrase 'based their own timeline' is missing the preposition 'on' (Grammar Problem Type ID:11). 'Make list' should be plural 'make lists' to match general meaning (Grammar Problem Type ID:1). 'Hook to that kind of list' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'be tied to it' or 'be bound by it'.

× I prefer to make a list on my phone because I can access it everywhere, anywhere and anytime that I want.

✓ I prefer to make lists on my phone because I can access them everywhere, anywhere, and anytime I want.

The singular 'a list' is acceptable if referring to one list, but 'lists' is more natural when talking about multiple lists. Also, 'it' should be 'them' to agree with the plural 'lists' (Grammar Problem Type ID:1).

× I think phone is more handy to use and to check my list.

✓ I think the phone is more handy to use and to check my list.

The noun 'phone' requires the definite article 'the' when referring to a specific object (Grammar Problem Type ID:17). Also, 'handy' is an adjective correctly used here.