List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中有重复词汇且语法不够准确，建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并且注意时态和冠词的使用，使表达更自然流畅。

例: Yes, I always make a list before shopping because it helps me plan what I need to buy and avoid unnecessary items.

提案: 回答中存在词汇错误（如'walking'应为'working'），重复词汇，且表达不够清晰，建议使用正确词汇，简洁表达，并用连接词使句子更连贯。

例: Yes, I usually make a list for my work because I have a packed schedule. It helps me organize tasks efficiently and manage my time well.

提案: 回答中语法结构混乱，表达不完整，建议分句表达原因，使用更准确的词汇，并避免句子过长导致意思不清。

例: Some people dislike making lists because they are very busy and prefer to do things spontaneously. They feel that lists restrict their freedom.

提案: 回答不完整且有语法错误，缺少关键内容，建议完整表达偏好理由，注意句子完整性和语法准确性。

例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because I don't like carrying paper. Using a to-do list app is more convenient for me.

× Well definitely I would make make a list since before I went to the shop I have my plans for what I need to buy and what is necessary and what is the things that is not useful.

✓ Well definitely I would make a list since before I went to the shop I have my plans for what I need to buy, what is necessary, and what are the things that are not useful.

句中“what is the things that is not useful”中，'things'是复数，谓语动词应使用复数形式'are'，而不是单数'is'。这是单复数一致性错误。建议主谓一致，复数名词用复数动词。

× Well, I usually make a list for my walking since I usually have a pack schedule, so I need to arrange everything in a right way and to to spend my time in a really nice way.

✓ Well, I usually make a list for my work since I usually have a packed schedule, so I need to arrange everything in the right way and to spend my time in a really nice way.

句中'my walking'应为'my work'，'pack schedule'应为'packed schedule'，'in a right way'应为'in the right way'。这些是介词和形容词使用错误。建议使用正确的介词搭配和形容词形式。

× Since they might be really busy that they don't want to arrange their staff in advance because without making a list they can do everything they want without restrictions, and making a list is a kind of limit to you that you will.

✓ Since they might be really busy, they don't want to arrange their stuff in advance because without making a list they can do everything they want without restrictions, and making a list is a kind of limit to you.

句中'staff'应为'stuff'，'staff'指员工，'stuff'指东西。且句子末尾'that you will'不完整，应删除。这里涉及名词单复数和词汇选择错误。建议区分词义，避免多余词语。

× For me, I prefer to make a list on my since I wouldn't take paper in my package or my bag.

✓ For me, I prefer to make a list on my phone since I wouldn't take paper in my package or my bag.

句中'make a list on my'后缺少名词，应补充'my phone'。此外，'in my package or my bag'中'package'应为'backpack'。这是介词和词汇使用错误。建议补全句子成分，使用正确词汇。