List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn có một số lỗi phát âm và từ vựng không chính xác như 'leaves' và 'leaks' thay vì 'list'. Bạn nên sử dụng từ vựng chính xác và tránh lỗi phát âm để câu trả lời tự nhiên và hiệu quả hơn. Ngoài ra, câu trả lời có thể ngắn gọn hơn và tránh lặp từ.

例: Yes, I usually make a list when I go shopping because it helps me remember everything I need. For example, last week I made a list and managed to buy all the groceries without any problems.

提案: Bạn trả lời khá tốt với cấu trúc rõ ràng và nội dung cụ thể. Tuy nhiên, câu 'it has me stay organized' không tự nhiên, bạn nên dùng 'it helps me stay organized'. Hãy chú ý sử dụng các cụm từ tự nhiên và chính xác hơn để nâng cao điểm số.

例: Yes, I regularly make a list for my work because it helps me stay organized and ensures I don't forget any important tasks. With a clear list, I can prioritize my work better and complete everything on time.

提案: Bạn đã trả lời đúng trọng tâm câu hỏi và có ý kiến rõ ràng. Tuy nhiên, bạn nên tránh lặp từ như 'tedious tedious' và sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn. Hãy thêm một câu nối để làm rõ ý hơn.

例: I think some people don't like making lists because it can be quite time-consuming and tedious. Moreover, they might prefer to keep things spontaneous rather than planning everything in advance.

提案: Bạn trả lời rõ ràng nhưng có lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng như 'insured' thay vì 'ensure'. Ngoài ra, tránh dùng từ không cần thiết như 'Umm'. Hãy sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và từ chính xác để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.

例: Honestly, I prefer to make a list on my phone because I always carry it with me, so I can easily add new tasks whenever I remember them. This helps me stay organized and ensures I don't forget any important responsibilities during the day.

× Yes, I usually make the leaves when I go shopping because it helps me remember everything I need to buy.

✓ Yes, I usually make the list when I go shopping because it helps me remember everything I need to buy.

The word 'leaves' is incorrect here because the correct singular noun is 'list'. The phrase 'make the leaves' does not make sense in this context. The correct phrase is 'make the list' to indicate preparing a shopping list.

× For example, last week I made leaks and managed to buy all the grocery without any hassles.

✓ For example, last week I made a list and managed to buy all the groceries without any hassles.

The word 'leaks' is incorrect; it should be 'a list' to refer to the shopping list. Also, 'grocery' should be plural 'groceries' because it refers to multiple items. Using singular 'grocery' here is incorrect.

× Yes, I regularly make a list for my work because it has me stay organized and I'm sure I don't forget any important task.

✓ Yes, I regularly make a list for my work because it helps me stay organized and I'm sure I don't forget any important task.

The phrase 'it has me stay organized' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'it helps me stay organized' to indicate that the list assists in organization. 'Has me' is not appropriate in this context.

× I'm sure I don't forget any important task.

✓ I'm sure I don't forget any important tasks.

The word 'task' should be plural 'tasks' because it refers to multiple important tasks. Using singular 'task' here is incorrect when referring to more than one.

× I think some people don't like because it can be quite time consuming and tedious tedious.

✓ I think some people don't like it because it can be quite time consuming and tedious.

The sentence is missing the pronoun 'it' after 'don't like'. The correct phrase is 'don't like it' to specify what they don't like. Also, the word 'tedious' is repeated unnecessarily.

× Umm this helped me stay organized and insured.

✓ Umm this helps me stay organized and ensures

The sentence uses past tense 'helped' and 'insured' incorrectly. It should be present tense 'helps' and 'ensures' to match the ongoing preference. Also, 'insured' is incorrect here; the correct verb is 'ensures' meaning 'makes sure'.

× I don't forget any important responsibility throughout the days.

✓ I don't forget any important responsibilities throughout the days.

The word 'responsibility' should be plural 'responsibilities' because it refers to multiple tasks. Also, 'throughout the days' is awkward; better to say 'throughout the day' or 'throughout the days' if multiple days are meant.