List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác, làm cho ý nghĩa không rõ ràng. Bạn nên sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và dùng từ phù hợp hơn để câu trả lời tự nhiên và hiệu quả hơn.

例: Yes, I always make a shopping list because it helps me avoid buying unnecessary items or forgetting important things. For instance, I usually create a list on my phone and check it while shopping. This way, I can save money and stay organized by only purchasing what I really need.

提案: Câu trả lời thiếu rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến ý nghĩa khó hiểu. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và giải thích rõ ràng hơn về việc làm danh sách công việc có hiệu quả hay không.

例: Yes, I like making lists for work because they help me stay organized. However, sometimes unexpected problems arise that I cannot plan for, so the list doesn't always work perfectly. In those cases, I have to adapt and find other ways to manage my tasks.

提案: Bạn nên hoàn thiện câu trả lời với cấu trúc rõ ràng hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp. Hãy sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc và cung cấp thêm ví dụ hoặc lý do cụ thể.

例: Some people don't like making lists because they feel it restricts their freedom and makes their routine too strict. Therefore, they prefer to adjust their goals and methods flexibly. Everyone has their own way of organizing tasks that suits them best.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn có ý tưởng tốt nhưng thiếu sự mạch lạc và có lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh, liên kết các ý với nhau và dùng từ phù hợp để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.

例: I prefer making lists on my phone because I always carry it with me. It's very convenient since I can easily erase, replace, and organize my to-do lists quickly, which is much harder to do on paper.

× Sure, a mouse always make a shopping list because it's helped me to avoid overbuying or forgetting important things.

✓ Sure, I always make a shopping list because it helps me to avoid overbuying or forgetting important things.

The original sentence uses 'a mouse' which is incorrect and likely a typo for 'I'. Also, 'make' should be 'make' for first person singular, and 'it's helped' should be 'it helps' to match present tense and subject-verb agreement.

× For example, I usually create a list on my and check it with me when I go shopping.

✓ For example, I usually create a list on my phone and check it when I go shopping.

The phrase 'on my' is incomplete and missing the noun 'phone'. Also, 'check it with me' is incorrect; it should be 'check it' to refer to the list.

× Will save me 10 money.

✓ It will save me 10 units of money.

The original sentence lacks a subject and is incomplete. Adding 'It' as the subject and clarifying '10 money' to '10 units of money' improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Yes, I'm the one I love to making this, especially on work and shopping.

✓ Yes, I'm the one who loves making this, especially for work and shopping.

The phrase 'I love to making' is incorrect; it should be 'who loves making'. Also, 'on work' should be 'for work' to use the correct preposition.

× That is the doesn't work every time because you know when it comes to work problems can occur suddenly that you cannot expect before.

✓ That doesn't work every time because, you know, when it comes to work, problems can occur suddenly that you cannot expect beforehand.

The original sentence has incorrect structure and missing words. 'That is the doesn't work' is incorrect; it should be 'That doesn't work'. Also, 'before' should be 'beforehand' for correct adverb usage.

× So I have to find a way to deal with it and put it to my.

✓ So I have to find a way to deal with it and put it into my plan.

The phrase 'put it to my' is incomplete and missing the noun 'plan' to complete the meaning.

× Different person have a different way to.

✓ Different people have different ways to do so.

'Person' should be plural 'people' to match the plural verb 'have'. Also, 'a different way to' is incomplete and should be 'different ways to do so'.

× Phone I'll say I just literally carrying my with me all the time, so making a list on the phone is quite convenient for me.

✓ Phone, I'll say I just literally carry my phone with me all the time, so making a list on the phone is quite convenient for me.

The phrase 'carrying my with me' is missing the noun 'phone'. Also, 'carrying' should be 'carry' to match the present tense with 'I'.

× Moreover, in the phone you can erase, replace and organize the To Do List more easier and quicker than in the.

✓ Moreover, on the phone you can erase, replace, and organize the To Do List more easily and quickly than on paper.

'More easier' is incorrect; 'easier' alone or 'more easily' should be used. Also, 'in the phone' should be 'on the phone'. The sentence is incomplete and needs 'than on paper' to complete the comparison.