List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答中存在语法错误和表达不连贯的问题，例如“make a shopping”应为“make a shopping list”，句子结构不完整且断断续续。建议你练习使用完整且连贯的句子，避免句子碎片化，同时注意词汇搭配。

例: Yes, definitely. I always make a shopping list because it helps me remember what I need to buy and prevents me from spending too much money on unnecessary items.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误，如“it's increases”应为“it increases”，“when I checking”应为“when I check”。建议你注意动词形式和时态的正确使用，同时可以使用连接词使句子更流畅。

例: Yes, I always make a list for my work because it increases my productivity. Plus, I feel a strong sense of accomplishment when I check off completed tasks on the list.

提案: 你的回答句子断断续续，缺少连贯性。建议你使用连接词如“because”、“also”来连接句子，并注意句子完整性，避免句子碎片。

例: Some people might not like making lists because they think it takes too much time to write everything down. Also, they trust their memory and believe they can remember all the important things without writing them down.

提案: 回答中时态使用不当，如“when I was writing”应为“when I write”，句子断裂影响流畅性。建议你注意时态一致性，并使用完整连贯的句子表达观点。

例: I prefer to make a list on paper because I really love the texture of paper when I write. Plus, I always add some beautiful stickers and drawings to my list to help me remember things better.

× I make a shopping.

✓ I make a shopping list.

句子结构不完整，缺少名词“list”来说明“shopping”的具体内容。应补充完整以表达清楚意思。

× This because it helps me remember better what I need to buy and avoid spending.

✓ This is because it helps me remember better what I need to buy and avoid spending.

句子缺少系动词“is”，导致结构不完整。应加上“is”使句子完整。

× Too much money due to irrational consuming.

✓ I avoid spending too much money due to irrational consuming.

该句为不完整句，缺少主语和谓语。应将其与前句合并或补充主谓结构。

× Without forgetting anything important.

✓ So I don't forget anything important.

该句为不完整句，缺少主语和谓语。应改为完整句表达完整意思。

× And it's increases my productivity.

✓ And it increases my productivity.

主语“it”是第三人称单数，谓语动词不应加“s”以外的形式，应为“increases”。

× when I checking off completed texts on the list.

✓ when I check off completed tasks on the list.

动词“check”在此处应为原形，因前面有“when I”，表示一般现在时。且“texts”应为“tasks”，更符合语境。

× Some people might not like making lists. Because they think it takes too much time to. Write everything down.

✓ Some people might not like making lists because they think it takes too much time to write everything down.

“Because”引导的从句不应单独成句，应与前句合并。

× Also, they trust their memory and believe that they can remember all the important things well. Without writing it.

✓ Also, they trust their memory and believe that they can remember all the important things well without writing them down.

“Without writing it”为不完整句，应与前句合并并改为复数形式“them”，且加上“down”使表达完整。

× I prefer to make a list on paper because I really love the texture of paper when I was writing.

✓ I prefer to make a list on paper because I really love the texture of paper when I write.

此处描述习惯动作，应使用一般现在时“write”，而非过去进行时“was writing”。

× Plus, I always. Add some beautiful stickers and drawings on my list to help me remember them better.

✓ Plus, I always add some beautiful stickers and drawings on my list to help me remember them better.

句子中“always”后不应有句号，导致句子断裂，应去掉句号使句子连贯。