List— Part 1 採点レポート
会話
Part 1
試験官
Do you make a list when you shop?
受験者
No, usually I don't make lists because I got everything in my head and it's just easier for me to remember and overall I just don't use notes and everything.
試験官
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
受験者
When it comes to making a list for my work, I usually do do some lists like A to do list where I where I write everything that I need to do and I prioritize.
試験官
Why don't some people like making lists?
受験者
I think that the most common reason is because they can do it by themselves and it's just sometimes not useful to have a paper list with you, or they're just lazy to write something down in on their phone.
試験官
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
受験者
Usually I prefer my phone because it's simply easier for me, it's always with me and it's very accessible and it just really comfortable and handy to use my phone.
評価
総合
Part 1
Do you make a list when you shop?
スコア: 70.0提案: Ваш ответ звучит естественно, но он немного длинный и содержит повторения. Попробуйте сделать ответ более кратким и структурированным, например, начните с прямого ответа, а затем добавьте одно-два конкретных объяснения, используя связующие слова.
例: No, I usually don't make lists when I shop because I can remember everything easily. Besides, I find it unnecessary to write notes for simple shopping trips.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
スコア: 65.0提案: Ответ содержит повторения и нечеткую структуру. Рекомендуется начать с прямого ответа, затем объяснить, как вы используете списки, и почему это эффективно, используя связующие слова для логичности.
例: Yes, I usually make to-do lists for my work. I write down all my tasks and prioritize them, which helps me stay organized and complete my work efficiently.
Why don't some people like making lists?
スコア: 60.0提案: Ответ немного неясен и содержит грамматические ошибки. Попробуйте сформулировать мысль более чётко, используя связующие слова и конкретные причины, избегая повторов.
例: Some people dislike making lists because they prefer to rely on their memory. Also, they might find paper lists inconvenient or feel too lazy to write things down on their phones.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
スコア: 75.0提案: Ответ хороший, но содержит повторения и немного длинный. Попробуйте сделать его более сжатым и использовать связующие слова для плавности.
例: I usually prefer making lists on my phone because it's always with me and very convenient. Moreover, using my phone is comfortable and makes organizing tasks easier.
文法
× No, usually I don't make lists because I got everything in my head and it's just easier for me to remember and overall I just don't use notes and everything.
✓ No, usually I don't make lists because I have everything in my head and it's just easier for me to remember and overall I just don't use notes and everything.
The verb 'got' is the past tense of 'get', but here the present perfect 'have' is appropriate to express possession or state. Using 'have' correctly indicates the current state of having everything in mind.
× I think that the most common reason is because they can do it by themselves and it's just sometimes not useful to have a paper list with you, or they're just lazy to write something down in on their phone.
✓ I think that the most common reason is because they can do it by themselves and sometimes it's just not useful to have a paper list with you, or they're just lazy to write something down on their phone.
The phrase 'it's just sometimes not useful' has awkward adverb placement; moving 'sometimes' before 'it's' improves clarity. Also, 'in on their phone' contains an extra preposition 'in' which is incorrect; only 'on their phone' is needed.
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