List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to give a clear topic sentence directly answering the question, then add specific details using simple linking words. Avoid unnecessary or confusing phrases.

例: Yes, I usually make a shopping list before I go to the market. This helps me remember all the items I need to buy and saves time. For example, I write down vegetables, fruits, and other essentials so I don't forget anything.

提案: Your answer is relevant but has some grammar mistakes and unclear phrases. Use a clear topic sentence and link your ideas logically. Try to use more precise vocabulary and avoid repetition.

例: Yes, I always make a to-do list for my work every morning. It helps me organize my tasks and track what I have completed. This method improves my productivity and keeps me focused throughout the day.

提案: Your answer has good content but contains grammar errors and unclear words like 'prostate' and 'least'. Use correct vocabulary and structure your answer with a clear reason and explanation.

例: Some people avoid making lists because they fear failing to complete all the tasks. If they don't finish everything, they may feel disappointed or stressed, so they prefer not to make lists at all.

提案: Your answer is understandable but has some awkward phrases and repetition. Try to express your preference clearly with supporting reasons and use linking words to connect ideas.

例: I prefer to make lists on my mobile phone because it is always with me. Using my phone is more convenient than paper, and I can easily edit or add items whenever I want.

× A power, easy to remember anything.

✓ A powerful way, easy to remember anything.

The word 'power' is a noun, but here an adjective is needed to describe the method. 'Powerful' is the correct adjective form to express strength or effectiveness.

× I make a list of the materials that I needed before going to solve.

✓ I make a list of the materials that I need before going to shop.

The verb 'make' is in present tense, so the verb 'need' should also be in present tense to maintain consistency. Also, 'going to solve' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'going to shop' or 'going shopping'.

× I made A1 seat and right there what things that I need and what I have to bring from market.

✓ I made a list and wrote down what things I need and what I have to bring from the market.

The original sentence is unclear and ungrammatical. 'A1 seat' is unclear and likely a mishearing or typo. The corrected sentence clarifies the intended meaning and corrects the structure.

× I want to say that I make A to do list while working off early in the morning.

✓ I want to say that I make a to-do list while working early in the morning.

The article 'A' should be lowercase 'a' and 'to do list' should be hyphenated as 'to-do list' to be correct.

× I make a list of what things I have done today.

✓ I make a list of the things I have done today.

The phrase 'what things' is incorrect here; 'the things' is the correct phrase to refer to completed tasks.

× This is due to they are afraid of failure because if they make list and if they do not complete that task before the day ends, they will be so prostate.

✓ This is because they are afraid of failure; if they make a list and do not complete the tasks before the day ends, they will be so frustrated.

The phrase 'due to they are' is incorrect; 'because they are' is correct. Also, 'make list' needs an article 'a list'. The word 'prostate' is a mispronunciation or typo for 'frustrated'.

× So that's why people don't make least as I think.

✓ So that's why people don't make lists, I think.

The word 'least' is incorrect; the correct word is 'lists' (plural). Also, a comma is needed before 'I think'.

× As a developing culture, I I prefer to make a note in my mobile phone as in our MO pocket there is always a mobile phone rather than paper.

✓ As a developing culture, I prefer to make a note on my mobile phone because in our pockets there is always a mobile phone rather than paper.

The phrase 'I I' is a repetition error. 'Make a note in my mobile phone' should be 'make a note on my mobile phone'. 'MO pocket' is unclear and likely 'our pockets'. The sentence is restructured for clarity.