List— Part 1 採点レポート
会話
Part 1
試験官
Do you make a list when you shop?
受験者
No, I don't. To be honest, nowadays I just shop online with some applications like Taobao, so I don't really go to the market to buy things, so I don't make a list.
試験官
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
受験者
I think yes, I do make a list for my work sometimes, but not very often. I think it has a limited effective for me.
試験官
Why don't some people like making lists?
受験者
Well, as the people who doesn't like making lists for me, the main reason is that I think it takes too much effort and time for me to make a list and I'm just too lazy to follow the list.
試験官
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
受験者
I prefer to make the list on phone. You know what, Nowadays with the development of technology, we have much more applications that can help us to make a list. For example, the notion that could not, and they are very useful.
評価
総合
Part 1
Do you make a list when you shop?
スコア: 70.0提案: 回答较为自然，但表达略显重复，且缺少连接词使句子流畅。建议减少重复表达，使用连接词使回答更连贯。
例: No, I don't usually make a list when I shop because I mostly buy things online using apps like Taobao, so I rarely go to the market.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
スコア: 65.0提案: 回答中存在语法错误（'limited effective'应为'limited effect'），且表达不够具体。建议注意语法准确性，并具体说明为什么效果有限。
例: Yes, I sometimes make lists for my work, but not often because I find they only help me a little in organizing my tasks.
Why don't some people like making lists?
スコア: 60.0提案: 句子结构混乱，语法错误较多，表达不够清晰。建议简化句子结构，注意主谓一致，并用更具体的理由说明。
例: Some people don't like making lists because it takes too much time and effort, and they may feel lazy to follow them.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
スコア: 55.0提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清（如'notion that could not'），且缺少具体细节。建议纠正错误，明确应用名称，并提供具体理由。
例: I prefer making lists on my phone because there are many useful apps like Notion that help me organize tasks efficiently.
文法
× I think it has a limited effective for me.
✓ I think it has limited effectiveness for me.
这里effective是形容词，应该用名词effectiveness来表达“效果”。此外，limited后面不需要冠词a。
× Well, as the people who doesn't like making lists for me, the main reason is that I think it takes too much effort and time for me to make a list and I'm just too lazy to follow the list.
✓ Well, as for the people who don't like making lists, the main reason is that I think it takes too much effort and time for me to make a list and I'm just too lazy to follow the list.
people是复数，谓语动词应该用don't而不是doesn't。句子中also缺少介词as for来引出话题。
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