List— Part 1 採点レポート
会話
Part 1
試験官
Do you make a list when you shop?
受験者
No, I don't make a list when I'm sharp or when I'm shopping. Hmm. Since I want to buy, it's always in my mind so I wouldn't have to make a list.
試験官
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
受験者
I don't make the list for my work, but I imagine the structure for my work in mind. I usually don't follow the list, don't follow the structure because I'm a kind of lazy person, so I just do whatever I want.
試験官
Why don't some people like making lists?
受験者
Because they might think making a list is a time wasting and unnecessary task. MMM, they are more prefer to remember the things in mind. So I'm the kind of person like that.
試験官
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
受験者
It is based on which way is more convenient. When I go out, I prefer making lists on my. When at school, I prefer to make lists on paper. So it is according to the scenarios you are in.
評価
総合
Part 1
Do you make a list when you shop?
スコア: 60.0提案: 你的回答有些重复且表达不够清晰，建议简洁明了地表达观点，并避免语法错误。可以用更自然的表达方式来说明你不做购物清单的原因。
例: No, I don't usually make a list when I go shopping because I can remember what I need to buy.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
スコア: 55.0提案: 回答中出现了语法错误和不自然的表达，建议用更正式和连贯的句子表达，同时避免自我评价词汇，保持客观。
例: I don't usually make a list for my work, but I plan the structure in my mind. Sometimes I follow it, but I also like to be flexible.
Why don't some people like making lists?
スコア: 50.0提案: 回答中有语法错误和表达不自然，建议使用正确的语法结构，并且避免口语化的填充词，使表达更流畅。
例: Some people don't like making lists because they think it's a waste of time and prefer to remember things mentally, like me.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
スコア: 65.0提案: 回答中有语法错误和不完整的句子，建议使用完整句子并且明确表达偏好，同时避免重复。
例: It depends on the situation. When I go out, I prefer to make lists on my phone, but at school, I prefer using paper.
文法
× No, I don't make a list when I'm sharp or when I'm shopping.
✓ No, I don't make a list when I'm shopping.
句中'sharp'用法不当，可能是想表达'shopping'，应删除'sharp'以符合语境。
× Because they might think making a list is a time wasting and unnecessary task.
✓ Because they might think making a list is a time-wasting and unnecessary task.
'time wasting'应连写为复合形容词'time-wasting'，修饰'task'，以符合英语习惯。
× MMM, they are more prefer to remember the things in mind.
✓ MMM, they prefer to remember things in their mind.
'are more prefer'结构错误，应直接用'ver'；'the things'改为'things'更自然；'in mind'前加' their'更准确。
× When I go out, I prefer making lists on my.
✓ When I go out, I prefer making lists on my phone.
句子缺少宾语，'on my'后应补充具体名词'phone'，使句子完整。
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