List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Try to use correct verb forms and avoid redundancy. For example, say "I always make a list before shopping because I might forget important items." Also, keep your answer concise and natural.

例: Yes, I always make a list before shopping because I might forget important items if I don't.

提案: Avoid repeating words and improve sentence structure. For example, say "Yes, I make a list for my work because it helps me remember important tasks." Also, try to combine your answers smoothly.

例: Yes, I make a list for my work because it helps me remember important tasks, and it works well.

提案: Use clearer sentence structure and correct grammar. For example, say "Some people don't like making lists because they think it's unnecessary and believe their memory is good enough."

例: Some people don't like making lists because they think it's unnecessary and believe their memory is good enough.

提案: Focus on clear and correct sentences. For example, say "I prefer to make a list on my phone because it is easy to carry and I always have my phone with me, unlike paper lists which I might forget."

例: I prefer to make a list on my phone because it is easy to carry and I always have my phone with me, unlike paper lists which I might forget.

× Yes, I always make a list before I go shopping because if I don't I will forgot something important that I need to buy.

✓ Yes, I always make a list before I go shopping because if I don't I will forget something important that I need to buy.

The verb 'forgot' is the past tense form, but here it should be the base form 'forget' after the modal verb 'will'. In English, modal verbs like 'will' are followed by the base form of the verb without 'to'. So, 'will forgot' is incorrect; it should be 'will forget'.

× Because some people, they think it's not important and they think they have a good memory to.

✓ Because some people think it's not important and they think they have a good memory too.

The pronoun 'they' is redundant after 'some people' in the same clause, so it should be omitted for clarity. Also, 'to' at the end is incorrect; the correct word is 'too' meaning 'also'.

× MMM I prefer to make a list on my phone because it easy to it easy for go to the shopping and I I know I didn't.

✓ MMM I prefer to make a list on my phone because it is easy to use, easy for going shopping, and I know I didn't forget it.

The sentence has multiple issues: 'it easy to it easy for go to the shopping' is ungrammatical. 'Easy to use' is the correct phrase. 'Easy for going shopping' is better than 'easy for go to the shopping'. Also, 'I I know I didn't' is incomplete; it should be 'I know I didn't forget it'. The preposition 'to' is incorrectly used before 'the shopping'; 'shopping' is uncountable and does not need 'the'.

× but if I list in on paper I will forget it.

✓ but if I list it on paper I will forget it.

The sentence is missing the object pronoun 'it' after 'list'. The phrase should be 'list it on paper' to be grammatically correct. Without 'it', the sentence is incomplete and unclear.