List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is generally clear and relevant, but there are some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing that affect naturalness and clarity. For example, "having a list help me" should be "having a list helped me" and "without mentoring in the store" is unclear. Also, try to use linking words like "so" or "therefore" to connect ideas smoothly. Keep your sentences concise and avoid redundancy.

例: I usually prepare a shopping list before I go shopping because it helps me remember all the items I need to buy. This way, I can stick to my budget and avoid unplanned purchases. For example, last week, having a list helped me quickly find everything I needed, so I saved both time and money.

提案: Your answer addresses the question but contains grammatical mistakes and incomplete sentences, such as "without the need of return reminders" and "I have a particular busy day, I might jot down a few points to stay." Try to use correct sentence structures and linking words like "because" and "however" to improve coherence. Also, be specific about what you jot down and why.

例: No, I don't usually make a list for my work because it's not very hectic, and I prefer to rely on my memory to keep track of my tasks. Since the workload is manageable, I find it easier to organise everything mentally. However, on particularly busy days, I might jot down a few important points to stay organised.

提案: Your answer is relevant and includes reasons and examples, but there are minor grammatical errors such as "the all the task" and "feel its limit their flexibility." Try to use correct articles and verb forms. Also, use linking words like "for instance" or "moreover" to connect ideas smoothly.

例: I think some people don't like making lists because it can be time-consuming and requires effort to organise everything properly. For instance, they might find it stressful to keep track of all the tasks or feel that it limits their flexibility. Moreover, some people prefer to rely on their memory rather than writing everything down.

提案: Your answer provides relevant information but is somewhat repetitive and contains grammatical errors, such as "for making list" and "for track keeping a track." Try to avoid repetition and use clearer sentence structures. Also, use linking words like "for example" and "because" to improve coherence.

例: I prefer to use apps for making lists. For example, I use one app to keep track of my periods and another app to manage my grocery shopping. This method is manageable and also eco-friendly.

× For example, last week, having a list help me quickly find everything and that I needed without mentoring in the store.

✓ For example, last week, having a list helped me quickly find everything that I needed without wandering in the store.

The verb 'help' should be in the past tense 'helped' to agree with the past time reference 'last week'. Also, 'mentoring' is incorrect here; the intended word is likely 'wandering', meaning moving around without purpose. Using the correct verb form and word improves clarity and grammatical accuracy.

× I prefer to rely on my memory to keep track of my task.

✓ I prefer to rely on my memory to keep track of my tasks.

The noun 'task' should be plural 'tasks' because it refers to multiple items to keep track of. Also, 'keep track of' is correctly used here, so no preposition change is needed. The correction addresses the singular/plural mismatch.

× Since the workload is manageable, I find it easier to organise everything mentally without the need of return reminders.

✓ Since the workload is manageable, I find it easier to organise everything mentally without the need for return reminders.

The correct preposition after 'need' is 'for', not 'of'. The phrase should be 'need for return reminders' to be grammatically correct.

× However, I have a particular busy day, I might jot down a few points to stay.

✓ However, if I have a particularly busy day, I might jot down a few points to stay organised.

The original sentence lacks proper conditional structure and is incomplete. 'Particular' should be 'particularly' (adverb) modifying 'busy day'. Also, the phrase 'to stay' is incomplete; it should specify what to stay, e.g., 'stay organised'. The correction fixes sentence structure and clarity.

× I think some people don't like making lists because it can be time consuming and requires a lot of effort to organise everything properly.

✓ I think some people don't like making lists because it can be time-consuming and requires a lot of effort to organise everything properly.

The phrase 'time consuming' should be hyphenated as 'time-consuming' when used as an adjective before a noun or in this context. This is a standard grammatical convention.

× For example, they might find it stressful to keep track of the all the task or feel its limit their flexibility.

✓ For example, they might find it stressful to keep track of all the tasks or feel it limits their flexibility.

The phrase 'the all the task' is incorrect; it should be 'all the tasks' (plural). Also, 'feel its limit their flexibility' is incorrect; it should be 'feel it limits their flexibility' to correctly use the pronoun and verb agreement.

× Additionally, some people prefer to rely on memory rather than writing down everything.

✓ Additionally, some people prefer to rely on their memory rather than writing down everything.

The noun 'memory' here should be preceded by a possessive pronoun 'their' to specify whose memory is referred to. This improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× I prefer to use the app for making list for certain things like for keeping a track of my periods I use a certain app and for track keeping a track of my groceries I use a different app because it is quite manageable and also eco friendly.

✓ I prefer to use apps for making lists for certain things. For example, to keep track of my periods, I use a certain app, and to keep track of my groceries, I use a different app because it is quite manageable and also eco-friendly.

Several corrections: 'the app' changed to 'apps' to match plural 'lists'; 'making list' corrected to 'making lists'; 'for keeping a track' corrected to 'to keep track'; sentence split for clarity; 'track keeping a track' corrected to 'to keep track'; 'eco friendly' hyphenated to 'eco-friendly'. These changes improve grammar, clarity, and readability.