List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn có ý chính rõ ràng nhưng có một số lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác (ví dụ: 'kiss me from spending' nên là 'keep me from spending'). Bạn nên sử dụng từ vựng chính xác và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.

例: Yes, I always make a list when I go shopping. It helps me remember everything I need and keeps me from spending too much money. Usually, I write it down on a piece of paper before I leave the house.

提案: Câu trả lời thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến ý nghĩa khó hiểu. Bạn nên luyện tập cách diễn đạt rõ ràng, sử dụng cấu trúc câu đúng và từ vựng phù hợp để truyền đạt ý tưởng hiệu quả hơn.

例: Yes, I make lists for my work. They help me stay organized and focus on my tasks. I usually use a digital app that reminds me about my deadlines, and it makes me feel confident when I complete my work on time.

提案: Bạn đã trả lời đúng trọng tâm nhưng câu trả lời có một số lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng chưa chính xác (ví dụ: 'making this' nên là 'making lists', 'your text' không rõ nghĩa). Hãy chú ý dùng từ chính xác và câu rõ ràng hơn.

例: I think some people don't like making lists because they feel it takes too much time. They believe they can remember their tasks without writing them down, so they prefer to start working immediately.

提案: Câu trả lời khá tự nhiên và rõ ràng nhưng bạn nên tránh dùng từ 'this' không rõ nghĩa, thay vào đó nên nói rõ 'a list'. Ngoài ra, bạn có thể thêm một câu nữa để làm phong phú câu trả lời.

例: I prefer making a list on paper because I enjoy the feeling of writing things down. It's easier for me to remember tasks that way, and I like crossing items off the list when I finish them. It gives me a sense of accomplishment.

× It helps me remember what I need to buy and kiss me from spending too much money.

✓ It helps me remember what I need to buy and keeps me from spending too much money.

The pronoun 'kiss' is incorrect here; the correct verb is 'keeps' to indicate prevention. The error is a misuse of pronouns and verbs, leading to confusion. Use 'keeps me from' to express prevention.

× Just I make a list for my work.

✓ I just make a list for my work.

The word order is incorrect. 'Just' should come before the subject or after the auxiliary verb. Correct placement improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× I use a digital app that reminds me about my desk and I feel good when I can take think of.

✓ I use a digital app that reminds me about my tasks and I feel good when I can think of them.

'Reminds me about my desk' is incorrect; it should be 'reminds me about my tasks'. Also, 'take think of' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'think of them'. This corrects preposition and phrase usage.

× I think some people don't like making this because they think it takes too much time.

✓ I think some people don't like making lists because they think it takes too much time.

The pronoun 'this' is vague and incorrect here; it should be 'lists' to refer clearly to the activity. Using the correct noun improves clarity.

× They believe that they can remember what you need to do without writing it down, so they prefer to just start working on their text.

✓ They believe that they can remember what they need to do without writing it down, so they prefer to just start working on their tasks.

The pronoun 'you' is incorrect; it should be 'they' to maintain consistency. Also, 'text' is incorrect in this context; 'tasks' fits better. Correct pronoun and noun usage is necessary.