List— Part 1 採点レポート
会話
Part 1
試験官
Do you make a list when you shop?
受験者
When you shop, No. I usually don't make a list when I go shopping because I prefer to shop spontaneously. I find it more convenient to buy things as I remember them rather than planning everything in advance.
試験官
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
受験者
In the past I used to make lists for my work, but I found that it didn't really help me stay organised. Sometimes I would forget to check the list, so it didn't reduce my stress as I expected. Now I prefer to work most spontaneously, which actually helps me feel more relaxed and focused.
試験官
Why don't some people like making lists?
受験者
I think some people find making this stressful because they feel pressured to complete everything on them. For example, if they fail to finish all the tasks, they might feel disappointed or unproductive, which can be discouraging. Therefore, they prefer not to make leads to avoid this kind of stress.
試験官
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
受験者
If I have to make a list, I prefer to do it on my phone because it is more convenient and easy to access anytime. For example, I can quickly add or remove items without carrying a physical paper, which can be easily lost or forgotten. Also, using my phone helps me stay organized.
評価
総合
Part 1
Do you make a list when you shop?
スコア: 75.0提案: 你的回答表达了观点，但开头的句子不够自然，且有些重复。建议直接回答问题，避免多余的词汇，并使用连接词使句子更流畅。
例: No, I usually don't make a list when I shop because I prefer to buy things spontaneously. This way, I can remember what I need without planning everything in advance, which feels more convenient to me.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
スコア: 80.0提案: 回答内容清晰，但可以使用更多连接词来增强逻辑性，同时避免重复表达。建议在句子间加入因果关系词汇，使表达更连贯。
例: I used to make lists for my work, but I found they didn't help me stay organised because I often forgot to check them. Therefore, I now prefer to work spontaneously, which helps me feel more relaxed and focused.
Why don't some people like making lists?
スコア: 70.0提案: 回答中有语法错误和用词不当，如“making this”和“make leads”。建议注意词汇准确性，并使用更具体的表达。
例: Some people dislike making lists because they feel pressured to complete all the tasks. For instance, if they can't finish everything, they may feel disappointed or unproductive, so they avoid making lists to reduce stress.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
スコア: 85.0提案: 回答较好，但可以使用更多连接词来增强句子间的连贯性，同时避免重复表达“convenient”和“easy to access”。
例: If I have to make a list, I prefer using my phone because it is convenient and accessible anytime. For example, I can quickly add or remove items without worrying about losing a physical paper, which helps me stay organized.
文法
× When you shop, No.
✓ No, when I shop,
The pronoun 'you' is incorrectly used here; the student should refer to themselves using 'I' to answer the question. Also, the sentence structure is awkward; starting with 'No,' followed by 'when you shop' is incorrect. The correct form is 'No, when I shop,' to clearly express the student's own behavior.
× I think some people find making this stressful because they feel pressured to complete everything on them.
✓ I think some people find making lists stressful because they feel pressured to complete everything on them.
The pronoun 'this' is incorrectly used to refer to 'making lists'; it should be 'making lists' explicitly for clarity. Also, 'everything on them' is correct as 'them' refers to 'lists' (plural), so no change needed there.
× Therefore, they prefer not to make leads to avoid this kind of stress.
✓ Therefore, they prefer not to make lists to avoid this kind of stress.
The phrase 'prefer not to make leads' is incorrect and unclear. The intended meaning is 'prefer not to make lists.' The word 'leads' is a mistake, likely a typo or mishearing. Correcting it to 'lists' makes the sentence meaningful and grammatically correct.
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