List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答表达了观点，但句子结构较为复杂且有些重复，建议简化句子，避免冗余，同时使用更自然的表达方式。

例: Yes, I usually make a shopping list because it helps me focus on what I really need and avoid unnecessary purchases. This way, I can manage my money more wisely.

提案: 回答中信息重复较多，句子较长且不够连贯，建议使用连接词使表达更流畅，并简洁明了地说明理由。

例: Yes, I always make a list for my work because it helps me organize my tasks and keep track of deadlines. As a result, I can complete my work on time and stay focused.

提案: 表达不够清晰，语法错误较多，建议简化句子结构，使用更准确的词汇，并注意语法和时态的正确使用。

例: Some people dislike making lists because they feel restricted and prefer to work more freely without strict plans. They might find lists stressful as they add pressure to complete tasks.

提案: 回答内容较完整，但句子结构稍显重复，建议使用连接词使表达更连贯，同时注意语法准确性。

例: I prefer making lists on my phone because it's more convenient and I can check it anytime, anywhere. Unlike paper lists, digital ones are less likely to be lost.

× Yes, I'm at least when I'm shopping because it helps me know more about what I'm going to buy and what is necessary and what is not that necessary because I'm the person who cares about how to spend money.

✓ Yes, I make a list when I'm shopping because it helps me know more about what I'm going to buy and what is necessary and what is not that necessary because I'm the person who cares about how to spend money.

句中“I'm at least”是错误的表达，正确的应该是“I make a list”，因为这里需要动词短语表示“做清单”的动作，而不是“be动词+副词”。

× So I do make a list to help me do some rational shopping.

✓ So I do make a list to help me shop rationally.

“do some rational shopping”表达不自然，应该用动词“shop”加副词“rationally”来表达“理性购物”。

× it keeps track of me and I won't be late of some subjects

✓ it keeps track of me and I won't be late for some subjects

“late of”是错误搭配，正确用法是“late for”，表示“迟到某事”。

× So it's really helpful and it always worked for me.

✓ So it's really helpful and it always works for me.

前半句用现在时态，后半句用过去时态不一致，且表达习惯用现在时态表示经常发生的事情。

× Maybe because they feel a little bit limited and be like prohibited by the list because they cannot do something freely and it put a lot of project on them to finish that list and it cannot just be freely and don't do any plan.

✓ Maybe because they feel a little bit limited and feel like they are prohibited by the list because they cannot do things freely, and it puts a lot of pressure on them to finish that list, so they cannot be free and don't make any plan.

原句中“be like prohibited”用法错误，应为“feel like they are prohibited”；“put a lot of project”应为“put a lot of pressure”；句子结构混乱，需调整连接词和时态。

× Since technology is getting more convenient recently, I prefer do a list on my phone.

✓ Since technology is getting more convenient recently, I prefer to make a list on my phone.

“prefer do”用法错误，正确结构是“prefer to do”；“do a list”应为“make a list”。

× It helps me check every time I need to see or just like a more convenient way to help me instead of keeping the paper because paper may be gone and then I can use my phone to check anytime anywhere.

✓ It helps me check whenever I need to see, and it's a more convenient way to help me instead of keeping paper because paper may be lost, and then I can use my phone to check anytime, anywhere.

“every time I need to see”应改为“whenever I need to see”；“just like a more convenient way”表达不清，应改为“it's a more convenient way”；“paper may be gone”应为“paper may be lost”；句子中缺少连接词，需调整。