List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Cevabınız doğal ancak biraz daha açık ve net olabilir. "which I need to do" ifadesi belirsiz ve anlamı tam olarak net değil. Ayrıca, cümlenizi daha akıcı hale getirmek için bağlaçlar kullanabilirsiniz.

例: Yes, I usually make a shopping list because I tend to forget the items I need to buy, so it helps me remember everything.

提案: Cevabınızda iyi bir yapı var ancak "more regular" ifadesi doğal değil. Ayrıca, cümlelerinizde bağlaç kullanarak akıcılığı artırabilirsiniz. Detayları biraz daha spesifik yapmanız faydalı olur.

例: Yes, I make a list for my work because it helps me stay organized and prioritize tasks effectively throughout the day.

提案: Cümleniz biraz karışık ve doğal değil. "Because some people can think like that" ifadesi gereksiz ve anlamsal olarak zayıf. Daha açık ve akıcı cümleler kurmalısınız.

例: Some people don't like making lists because they believe it's a waste of time or they have a good memory and don't need reminders.

提案: Cümlelerinizde bazı dilbilgisi hataları var, örneğin "can lost" yerine "can lose" kullanılmalı. Ayrıca, cümlelerinizi bağlaçlarla daha akıcı hale getirebilirsiniz.

例: I prefer to make a list on my phone because I might lose paper lists, but my phone is always with me, so I can access my list anytime.

× Yes I do, at least when I shop because I can forget easily which I need to do.

✓ Yes, I do, at least when I shop because I can easily forget what I need to do.

The adverb 'easily' should be placed before the verb 'forget' for correct adverb placement. Also, 'which I need to do' is incorrect; 'what I need to do' is the correct relative pronoun here.

× It helped me to be more organized and prioritize what I need to do within a day.

✓ It helps me to be more organized and prioritize what I need to do within a day.

The sentence refers to a habitual action, so present tense 'helps' is appropriate instead of past tense 'helped'.

× Because some people can think like that, making lists is useless, is waste of time and maybe some people don't forget what they need to do or what they need to buy according to their plan.

✓ Because some people think like that, making lists is useless, a waste of time, and maybe some people don't forget what they need to do or what they need to buy according to their plan.

The phrase 'can think like that' is better as 'think like that' for clarity. Also, 'is waste of time' should be 'a waste of time' to use the correct article. The conjunctions need to be properly placed with commas and 'and' before the last item.

× I prefer to make a list on my phone because I can lost the paper.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because I can lose the paper.

'Can lost' is incorrect; modal verb 'can' should be followed by the base form 'lose'.

× Phone is always in my pocket or on my hands.

✓ The phone is always in my pocket or in my hands.

'Phone' needs the definite article 'the' because it refers to a specific phone. Also, 'on my hands' should be 'in my hands' to correctly describe holding something.

× I can reach the phone every time, but I can lost the paper.

✓ I can reach the phone anytime, but I can lose the paper.

'Can lost' is incorrect; modal verb 'can' should be followed by the base form 'lose'. Also, 'every time' is better replaced with 'anytime' for natural expression.