List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Perbaiki struktur kalimat agar lebih jelas dan alami, serta hindari pengulangan kata seperti 'easily'. Gunakan kata penghubung yang tepat untuk membuat jawaban lebih koheren dan lengkap.

例: Yes, I always make a checklist before shopping and organize items by categories such as fruits, vegetables, and household products. This helps me find everything quickly and ensures I don't forget anything.

提案: Perbaiki tata bahasa dan gunakan kata penghubung untuk menjelaskan hubungan antar ide. Gunakan bentuk kata kerja yang benar dan hindari kalimat yang terputus.

例: Yes, I make a list for my work, and it really helps me prioritize tasks. This way, I can focus on the most important tasks first and avoid forgetting others.

提案: Perjelas ide dan gunakan kalimat yang lengkap. Hindari penggunaan kata-kata yang tidak perlu seperti 'umm' dan gunakan kata penghubung untuk membuat jawaban lebih logis.

例: Well, some people don't like making lists because they prefer to be spontaneous and feel that lists limit their freedom. They might think that making decisions on the spot is better for them.

提案: Perbaiki struktur kalimat agar lebih jelas dan alami. Gunakan kalimat lengkap dan hindari frasa yang tidak jelas seperti 'that method is make me'.

例: I prefer making lists on paper rather than on my phone because writing things down helps me remember better and organize my thoughts more effectively.

× Yes, I make a checklist before shopping and I organize them by its categories such as fruits, vegetables and household products.

✓ Yes, I make a checklist before shopping and I organize it by its categories such as fruits, vegetables and household products.

The pronoun 'them' is incorrect because 'checklist' is singular, so the correct pronoun is 'it'. Penggunaan kata ganti 'them' salah karena 'checklist' adalah tunggal, maka kata ganti yang benar adalah 'it'.

× By writing it down, it makes me easier to find everything easily.

✓ By writing it down, it makes it easier for me to find everything easily.

The phrase 'makes me easier' is incorrect; it should be 'makes it easier for me' to correctly express the idea. Frasa 'makes me easier' salah; seharusnya 'makes it easier for me' untuk mengungkapkan ide dengan benar.

× And for forgetting anything, remember and.

✓ And to avoid forgetting anything, I try to remember everything.

The original sentence is incomplete and unclear; restructuring it clarifies the intended meaning. Kalimat asli tidak lengkap dan tidak jelas; merestrukturisasi membuat makna yang dimaksud menjadi jelas.

× So I can prioritize my task and I can easily doing something important first before do another task.

✓ So I can prioritize my tasks and I can easily do something important first before doing another task.

The verb 'doing' is incorrectly used after 'can'; it should be the base form 'do'. Also, 'task' should be plural to match context. Kata kerja 'doing' salah digunakan setelah 'can'; seharusnya bentuk dasar 'do'. Juga, 'task' harus jamak sesuai konteks.

× And I'm not forgetting about the other tasks too.

✓ And I don't forget about the other tasks too.

The phrase 'I'm not forgetting' is less appropriate here; simple present 'I don't forget' fits better for habitual actions. Frasa 'I'm not forgetting' kurang tepat di sini; present simple 'I don't forget' lebih cocok untuk kebiasaan.

× Well, I think some people don't make a list because they already didn't know what they want to do or they just love being spontaneous.

✓ Well, I think some people don't make a list because they don't know what they want to do or they just love being spontaneous.

Mixing past 'didn't know' with present 'don't make' is inconsistent; use present tense 'don't know' to match. Penggunaan campuran past 'didn't know' dengan present 'don't make' tidak konsisten; gunakan present 'don't know' agar sesuai.

× Umm, maybe they thought that having at least just limit their freedom, for example making a decision is better for them as.

✓ Umm, maybe they think that having a list just limits their freedom; for example, making decisions is better for them.

Incorrect preposition and sentence structure; 'having a list' is the correct phrase and sentence needs completion. Preposisi dan struktur kalimat salah; 'having a list' adalah frasa yang benar dan kalimat perlu dilengkapi.

× I prefer making a list on my paper rather than my phone because writing it down makes me remember better and that method is make me.

✓ I prefer making a list on paper rather than on my phone because writing it down helps me remember better and that method helps me.

Incorrect pronoun 'my paper' should be 'paper'; 'is make me' is incorrect and should be 'helps me'. Kata ganti 'my paper' salah, seharusnya 'paper'; 'is make me' salah dan harus 'helps me'.

× Organize my thoughts better.

✓ It helps me organize my thoughts better.

Fragment sentence; needs a subject and verb to be complete. Kalimat fragmen; perlu subjek dan kata kerja agar lengkap.