List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答表达了观点，但语法和用词不够准确，且有些句子重复和冗余。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并使用更自然的表达方式。

例: Yes, I always make a shopping list before I go to the store. It helps me remember what I need to buy and prevents me from forgetting important items. Also, it stops me from purchasing unnecessary things.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清的问题，且有重复词汇。建议使用更准确的句子结构，清晰表达观点，并避免重复。

例: Yes, I often make lists for my work because they help me remember important tasks. Making lists prevents me from forgetting anything important, so it really works well.

提案: 回答不完整且表达不清，句子结构混乱。建议完整回答问题，清晰表达观点，并使用连贯的句子。

例: Some people don't like making lists because they think it takes too much time and is unnecessary. However, I believe making lists is important because it helps organize tasks efficiently.

提案: 回答中有重复和不完整的句子，表达不流畅。建议简洁明了地表达偏好，并说明原因。

例: I prefer to make lists on paper because writing with a pen makes me feel more connected to my work and gives me a sense of accomplishment.

× For me make a list is a good way to let me know what I should buy and let me don't forget to forget some important things.

✓ For me, making a list is a good way to let me know what I should buy and not forget some important things.

这里“make a list”作为主语时，应使用动名词形式“making a list”，表示动作的概念。原句中缺少动名词形式，导致语法错误。建议将动词改为动名词形式。

× let me don't forget to forget some important things.

✓ help me not forget some important things.

“let me don't forget”结构不正确，否定形式应使用“help me not forget”或“prevent me from forgetting”。“let”后面不接否定形式。建议使用“help me not forget”表达否定含义。

× Also, having a list is the good warning for me to buy some unnecessary things.

✓ Also, having a list is a good warning for me not to buy some unnecessary things.

“the good warning”中“the”使用不当，应为不定冠词“a”。另外，“to buy some unnecessary things”表达与前文意图相反，应改为“not to buy”。建议调整冠词并修改表达以符合语义。

× the list came from forgetting some important important things.

✓ the list helps me avoid forgetting some important things.

“came from forgetting”时态和表达不符合语境，应使用现在时态表达习惯动作。重复“important”是笔误，应删除。建议改为“helps me avoid forgetting”。

× It is really works.

✓ It really works.

“is really works”中“is”多余，动词“works”已为第三人称单数形式。应直接使用“It really works”。建议去掉多余的“is”。

× For the reason that some people don't like making this, they think it is time consuming and necessary.

✓ Because some people don't like making lists, they think it is time-consuming and unnecessary.

“making this”指代不明，应明确为“making lists”。“necessary”应为“unnecessary”与前文语境相符。建议明确指代并修正形容词。

× For me it is necessary and.

✓ For me, it is necessary.

句子末尾“and”无后续内容，导致句子结构不完整。建议删除“and”使句子完整。

× I like the feeling when I when I hold my pen it is it let me feel that my work is.

✓ I like the feeling when I hold my pen; it makes me feel that my work is worthwhile.

句子重复“when I”，且“it is it let me feel”结构混乱，应简化为“it makes me feel”。建议删除重复部分并调整句子结构。

× Is worthwhile.

✓ It is worthwhile.

句子缺少主语，应补充“it”使句子完整。建议补充主语。