List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Ваш ответ не совсем ясен и содержит грамматические ошибки. Постарайтесь отвечать более структурировано, используя простые и понятные предложения. Например, начните с прямого ответа, затем добавьте объяснение. Избегайте лишних слов и старайтесь говорить связно.

例: No, I usually don't make a shopping list because my parents never did it when I was growing up. So, when I go to the supermarket, I just buy what I need at the moment.

提案: Ответ содержит повторения и нечеткие формулировки. Рекомендуется использовать связующие слова для логичности и избегать повторов. Также старайтесь давать более конкретные детали и примеры.

例: I usually don't make lists for work, but I have tried a few times. However, my plans often fail because I try to do too many things at once. I think making better, more realistic lists would help me improve.

提案: Ответ слишком длинный и немного запутанный. Постарайтесь использовать более простые и четкие предложения, а также связывать идеи с помощью слов-связок. Добавьте конкретные причины и примеры.

例: Some people don't like making lists because it can be tiring to decide which tasks are most important. Also, organizing tasks takes time, and they may feel it wastes their time instead of helping.

提案: Ответ содержит много пауз и неоконченных мыслей. Рекомендуется говорить более уверенно и структурировано, избегая лишних звуков и повторов. Также можно добавить сравнение между двумя вариантами.

例: Although I like modern technology, I prefer making lists on paper because I can write freely in any size and style I want. It feels more personal and flexible than using my phone.

× Actually, I grew up in a family where my parents I never do the shopping list, so I get it eat as an example and when now I go to the supermarket and make my groceries, I just buy what I.

✓ Actually, I grew up in a family where my parents never made a shopping list, so I took it as an example, and now when I go to the supermarket to buy groceries, I just buy what I need.

The original sentence has multiple structural issues, including misplaced subjects and verbs, and unclear phrasing. The correction rearranges the sentence to clarify meaning and ensure proper verb tense and subject placement.

× I usually don't do the list for my work, but I tried to do it a couple of times.

✓ I usually don't make a list for my work, but I have tried to do it a couple of times.

The phrase 'do the list' is incorrect; the correct collocation is 'make a list'. Also, 'I tried' is changed to 'I have tried' to better fit the context of recent experiences.

× So I thought that it would be much more better for me.

✓ So I thought that it would be much better for me.

The phrase 'much more better' is redundant because 'better' is already a comparative adjective. Using 'much better' is correct.

× It can make you quite tiring because you have to think which test prioritize how to put them in the correct order so you will be able to accomplish all of them and it just takes a lot of your time.

✓ It can make you quite tired because you have to think about which tasks to prioritize and how to put them in the correct order so you can accomplish all of them, and it just takes a lot of your time.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'tiring' instead of 'tired' to describe a feeling. Also, 'test' should be 'tasks', and the sentence needed prepositions and conjunctions for clarity.

× Just you will spend a lot of time just thinking about this and will end up.

✓ You will just spend a lot of time thinking about this and end up exhausted.

The original sentence is incomplete and awkwardly structured. The correction completes the thought and improves sentence flow.

× I really like modern technologies, but I prefer making notes, umm, in my notebook where I can freely write and the, uh, size I want, uh, in the speed I want and I can get the, uh, beautiful, uh, writing.

✓ I really like modern technologies, but I prefer making notes in my notebook where I can freely write in the size I want, at the speed I want, and I can have beautiful handwriting.

The original sentence misuses prepositions 'the size' and 'in the speed'. Correct prepositions are 'in the size' and 'at the speed'. Also, 'get the beautiful writing' is better expressed as 'have beautiful handwriting'.