List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is quite long and somewhat repetitive. Try to be more concise and avoid redundancy. Also, use correct grammar and sentence structure to sound more natural. For example, instead of saying "I'm a really lazy person in writing," say "I don't like writing lists."

例: No, I usually don't make a list when I shop because I find it tedious. As a result, I often forget what I need and have to think about it while shopping.

提案: Your answer is clear but could be improved by using better sentence structure and linking words. Also, avoid minor grammar mistakes like "a better plans" (should be "better plans").

例: Yes, I do make lists for my work because I am an English teacher. Making lists helps me organize my lessons and create a better classroom atmosphere.

提案: Your answer is a bit unclear and contains grammar errors. Try to express your ideas more clearly and use linking words to connect your points logically.

例: I think some people dislike making lists because they find it difficult to create effective ones. Also, they may believe they won't forget things, but later realize that making lists is necessary.

提案: Your answer is understandable but could be more natural by correcting grammar and using smoother phrasing. Avoid phrases like "in everywhere" and use linking words for clarity.

例: I prefer making lists on my phone because I always have it with me, so it's more convenient than using paper.

× Actually, no, I don't because I'm a really lazy person in writing and that's so bad because I always forgot what do I need when I go to shop and I just thinking about it, OK, what do I need? What should I buy and so bad.

✓ Actually, no, I don't because I'm a really lazy person when it comes to writing and that's so bad because I always forget what I need when I go shopping and I just think about it, OK, what do I need? What should I buy? It's so bad.

The sentence contains incorrect verb forms: 'forgot' should be 'forget' to match the present tense context, 'do I need' should be 'I need' in indirect question form, 'go to shop' should be 'go shopping' as the correct verb phrase, and 'just thinking' should be 'just think' to maintain correct verb tense and form. These corrections ensure proper verb usage and sentence clarity.

× Yes I do because I'm an English teacher and I teach kids two hours in a day and I do a list because it really helps me to have a better class atmosphere and have a better plans.

✓ Yes, I do because I'm an English teacher and I teach kids for two hours a day and I make a list because it really helps me to have a better class atmosphere and better plans.

The phrase 'do a list' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'make a list'. Also, 'two hours in a day' should be 'for two hours a day' to express duration properly. 'Have a better plans' should be 'have better plans' because 'plans' is plural and does not need 'a'. These corrections improve verb usage and prepositional phrases.

× I believe in that they don't like because they can't make a good list or also maybe they thinks they never will forgot things, but as a result they understand they have to do and it's necessary to make a list.

✓ I believe that they don't like it because they can't make a good list or maybe they think they will never forget things, but as a result, they understand they have to do it and it's necessary to make a list.

The phrase 'believe in that' should be 'believe that'. 'They thinks' should be 'they think' to agree with plural subject. 'Never will forgot' should be 'will never forget' for correct word order and verb form. 'They have to do' should be 'they have to do it' to clarify the object. These corrections fix pronoun usage, verb agreement, and sentence clarity.

× You know, I prefer that make a list on my phone because I always have a phone in everywhere and it's really easier than to make a list in a paper.

✓ You know, I prefer to make a list on my phone because I always have my phone with me everywhere and it's really easier than making a list on paper.

'Prefer that make' should be 'prefer to make' as the correct verb pattern. 'Have a phone in everywhere' is incorrect; it should be 'have my phone with me everywhere'. 'Than to make a list in a paper' should be 'than making a list on paper' to use the correct comparative structure and preposition. These corrections improve preposition use and verb forms.