List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，例如“Definitely one shop”不符合英语习惯，建议使用完整且自然的句子表达观点。同时，回答可以更简洁，避免冗余。

例: Yes, I always make a shopping list on my phone because it helps me find items quickly and saves a lot of time.

提案: 回答中有语法错误，如“improve our efficient”应为“improve our efficiency”，且表达不够流畅。建议使用更准确的词汇和连贯的句子结构。

例: Yes, I always make lists on my computer for work because it helps me manage tasks efficiently and complete them quickly.

提案: 语法错误较多，如“doesn't like make a list”应为“don't like making lists”，句子不连贯且表达不清晰。建议加强语法基础，使用连贯的句子表达原因。

例: Some people don't like making lists because they find it too complicated and prefer to do things based on their own judgment.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，如“prefer make a list”应为“prefer to make a list”，以及“the paper is to complete complete”表达不明确。建议使用准确的表达并避免重复。

例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because smartphones are common and it's more convenient than using paper, which can be easily lost or damaged.

× Definitely one shop.

✓ Definitely one shop list.

这里缺少复数形式的名词，应该说“one shop list”或者更自然的表达是“I always make a shopping list.”，因为“list”是可数名词，且语境中需要表达“购物清单”。

× I always make a list on my phone.

✓ I always make a list on my phone.

此句中“make a list on my phone”是正确的表达，表示在手机上制作清单，符合英语习惯，无需修改。

× I think it's very convenient and I can find what I want very quickly, so it can save a lot of time.

✓ I think it's very convenient and I can find what I want very quickly, so it saves a lot of time.

主语是“it”，第三人称单数，谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式“saves”，否则主谓不一致。

× I always make lists on my computer and I can handle it very quickly.

✓ I always make lists on my computer and I can handle them very quickly.

“lists”是复数，指代时应使用复数代词“them”，而不是单数“it”。

× I think it's a good way to improve our efficient in work.

✓ I think it's a good way to improve our efficiency at work.

“efficient”是形容词，名词形式应为“efficiency”；“in work”应改为“at work”，表示在工作中。

× I think some people doesn't like make a list because they'll think this is too. Complex.

✓ I think some people don't like to make a list because they think it is too complex.

“some people”是复数，谓语动词应使用复数形式“don't”；“like make”应改为“like to make”；“this is too. Complex”中“too.”和“Complex”断句错误，应合并为“too complex”。

× They are often like make things by their own opinion.

✓ They often like to do things according to their own opinion.

“like make”应为“like to do”；“by their own opinion”应改为“according to their own opinion”，更符合英语表达习惯。

× I prefer make a list on my phone because the smartphone is very common nowadays.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because smartphones are very common nowadays.

“prefer”后应接不定式“to make”；“the smartphone”泛指应使用复数“smartphones”。

× We don't have to make a list on paper because the paper is to complete complete.

✓ We don't have to make a list on paper because paper is too complicated.

“the paper”泛指时不加冠词；“to complete complete”应为“too complicated”，表达“太复杂”。