List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答有些重复和语法错误，比如“I have I have to prepare”，建议简化句子结构，避免重复，同时注意语法准确。可以更自然地表达购物时是否列清单的情况。

例: It depends. When I plan to cook a new dish, I usually make a list of all the ingredients I need. But sometimes, I just go shopping and buy whatever catches my eye.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和重复，如“I sometimes I made the list”和“I I handle it”，建议注意时态一致和避免重复。可以用更连贯的句子表达工作清单的作用。

例: Yes, I sometimes make lists, especially before exams or quizzes. They help me by breaking big tasks into smaller parts, which I can handle one by one.

提案: 回答中表达不够清晰，有重复和语法错误。建议避免口语化的犹豫词，清楚表达观点，并用更准确的词汇描述原因。

例: I think some people dislike making lists because they tend to procrastinate and prefer flexibility over strict plans. For example, people with a 'P' personality type might avoid rigid schedules.

提案: 回答中有些冗长和重复，如“they, they're really helpful”，建议简洁表达，避免重复，同时注意句子流畅。

例: I prefer making lists on my phone because there are many elegant and user-friendly apps available, which make planning easier and more efficient.

× I would take a list and write down all the ingredients I have I have to prepare, but other times I just go to the shop and see something I I prefer and take away.

✓ I would take a list and write down all the ingredients I have to prepare, but other times I just go to the shop and see something I prefer and take away.

句子中"I have I have to prepare"重复了"I have"，属于句子结构错误，应删除多余部分。

× I sometimes I made the list, especially during the time before the final exam or some quizzes.

✓ Sometimes I make a list, especially before the final exam or some quizzes.

这里时态应与现在习惯动作一致，使用一般现在时"make"，而非过去时"made"。另外，句子中"I sometimes I made"重复，应去掉多余的"I"。

× It's like they are J person. Oh no P person sorry.

✓ It's like they are J persons. Oh no, P persons, sorry.

"person"应使用复数形式"persons"，因为指代一类人群。

× And they're kind of procrastination.

✓ And they tend to procrastinate.

"procrastination"是名词，句中需要动词形式，故改为"procrastinate"。

× They they, they are not likely to fix on a rigid plan.

✓ They are not likely to stick to a rigid plan.

"fix on"用法不当，正确表达应为"stick to"，表示坚持某计划。

× Well, actually I love making plans in my phone because nowadays there's lots of well decorated and dedicated, elegant, beautiful applications in App Store and you can download them and they, they're really helpful.

✓ Well, actually I love making plans on my phone because nowadays there are lots of well-decorated, dedicated, elegant, beautiful applications in the App Store that you can download, and they're really helpful.

"in my phone"应为"on my phone"，表示使用设备。"there's lots"应为"there are lots"，主谓一致。形容词之间用连字符连接，如"well-decorated"。句子结构需调整使表达更流畅。