List— Part 1 採点レポート
会話
Part 1
試験官
Do you make a list when you shop?
受験者
Well usually when I shop I do not make a list, I just make a note in my notes app on my phone.
試験官
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
受験者
Yes of course I usually do. I usually make A to do list for my job and my studying. It helps me a lot because it just makes me super focused on my goals.
試験官
Why don't some people like making lists?
受験者
Well, I did not know exactly why some people don't like making lists, but I guess it might be because they have dyslexia or maybe a disease like that.
試験官
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
受験者
Well it depends on in what area I am making list in. So for example when I go shopping I do a list of groceries or makeup products or HomeGoods that I need. So I do it on my.
評価
総合
Part 1
Do you make a list when you shop?
スコア: 75.0提案: Ваш ответ естественный, но можно улучшить структуру и связность. Попробуйте начать с прямого ответа, затем объяснить, почему вы используете приложение, и добавить детали, используя связующие слова.
例: I usually don't make a paper list when I shop; instead, I use the notes app on my phone because it's convenient and easy to update.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
スコア: 80.0提案: Ответ хороший, но можно улучшить связность и разнообразие словарного запаса. Используйте связующие слова и более точные выражения для объяснения пользы списка.
例: Yes, I usually make a to-do list for both my job and studies, and it works well because it helps me stay focused and organized.
Why don't some people like making lists?
スコア: 60.0提案: Ответ недостаточно конкретный и немного неуместный. Лучше дать более общее и логичное объяснение, избегая предположений о болезнях.
例: Some people might dislike making lists because they find it time-consuming or prefer to keep things flexible and spontaneous.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
スコア: 55.0提案: Ответ неполный и нечеткий. Следует завершить мысль, использовать связующие слова и четко указать предпочтение, а также объяснить причины.
例: It depends on the situation; for shopping, I prefer making lists on my phone because it's convenient, but for work tasks, I like paper lists since I can easily see everything at once.
文法
× I usually make A to do list for my job and my studying.
✓ I usually make a to-do list for my job and my studying.
The article 'A' should be lowercase 'a' because it is not at the beginning of the sentence. Also, 'to do list' should be hyphenated as 'to-do list' to correctly form the compound noun.
× Well it depends on in what area I am making list in.
✓ Well, it depends on which area I am making the list in.
The phrase 'depends on in what area' is incorrect. The correct preposition is 'on' followed by 'which area'. Also, 'making list' should be 'making the list' to specify the object.
× Well it depends on in what area I am making list in.
✓ Well, it depends on which area I am making the list in.
The noun 'list' requires the definite article 'the' because it refers to a specific list being made.
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