List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不够自然，句子结构重复且冗长。建议简化句子，避免重复表达，并使用更准确的词汇。

例: Yes, I usually make a shopping list because it helps me remember everything I need and makes the process more organized.

提案: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不清晰。建议使用完整句子，明确说明做清单和时间安排的作用，并使用连接词使表达更连贯。

例: Yes, I often make lists and schedules for my work, especially during exams, to manage my time efficiently and complete assignments on time.

提案: 回答语法混乱，表达不完整且难以理解。建议先明确观点，再用具体理由支持，注意句子完整和逻辑连贯。

例: Some people dislike making lists because they feel it restricts their freedom and puts pressure on them to complete tasks on time.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和表达不完整，缺少清晰的比较。建议明确表达偏好，并说明原因，使用连贯的句子。

例: I prefer making lists on my phone because there are many apps that help me organize my schedule, and it's convenient to check the list anytime.

× Yes, I usually make a list when I go shopping because making a list will make me feel more comfortable when I buy the stuff and I'll almost forget to buy the stuff what I need so that I think making a list would be better for me.

✓ Yes, I usually make a list when I go shopping because making a list makes me feel more comfortable when I buy the stuff, and I almost forget to buy the stuff that I need, so I think making a list is better for me.

这里的错误主要是动词形式和句子结构问题。'making a list will make me feel'改为一般现在时'makes'更符合习惯表达；'I'll almost forget'应为一般现在时'almost forget'，因为描述的是习惯动作；'what I need'应改为'that I need'，使用关系代词'that'更合适。建议注意动词时态的一致性和关系代词的正确使用。

× Yes, I usually make this for my work. For example, when I do the assignment or the exam period, I will make a list and make a schedule. What time I need to do the assignment to make the schedule small smoothly.

✓ Yes, I usually make a list for my work. For example, during the assignment or exam period, I make a list and a schedule to plan when I need to do the assignments so that the schedule runs smoothly.

原句中存在句子结构混乱和表达不清的问题。'make this for my work'应明确为'make a list for my work'；'when I do the assignment or the exam period'表达不准确，应改为'during the assignment or exam period'；'What time I need to do the assignment to make the schedule small smoothly'句子不完整且语序错误，应改为完整句子表达计划安排时间以使日程顺利进行。建议注意句子完整性和逻辑连贯性。

× I think the reason some people don't like making the list on their schedule, because if making a list, they will may have some time manage to control the people need to do the things on time and.

✓ I think the reason some people don't like making lists on their schedule is that if they make a list, they may have to manage their time to ensure they do things on time.

原句中'may have some time manage to control the people need to do the things on time and'表达混乱，'will may'是错误的双重情态动词，应只用'may'；'if making a list'应改为'if they make a list'，使用完整的主谓结构。建议注意情态动词的正确使用和句子主谓一致。

× For me, I would prefer make a list on my because nowadays there are some apps to make a schedule and the memo thus can make a list on the. It will help me more convenient to check the list every time.

✓ For me, I would prefer to make a list on my phone because nowadays there are some apps to make a schedule and memos, so I can make a list on it. It helps me check the list more conveniently every time.

原句中缺少介词'to'，'prefer make'应为'prefer to make'；'on my'缺少名词，应为'on my phone'；'the memo thus can make a list on the'表达不完整且介词使用错误，应改为'so I can make a list on it'；'help me more convenient'应改为'helps me check the list more conveniently'，副词形式错误。建议注意介词的完整使用和副词形式。