List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to respond directly and clearly, using the present tense consistently. Avoid redundancy and incomplete sentences. Also, provide a reason or example to enrich your answer.

例: No, I usually don't make a list when I shop because I prefer to buy things spontaneously based on what I need at the moment.

提案: Your answer does not address the question. You should respond directly by stating whether you make lists for your work and if they are effective. Provide supporting details to clarify your answer.

例: Yes, I often make lists for my work because they help me stay organized and ensure I don't forget important tasks.

提案: Your answer is unclear and incomplete. Try to give a clear explanation with specific reasons why some people dislike making lists. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

例: Some people don't like making lists because they find it restrictive, while others prefer to rely on their memory instead of writing things down.

提案: Your answer is understandable but contains grammatical errors and redundancy. Try to express your ideas more clearly and concisely, using linking words to improve coherence.

例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it's more convenient and I don't have to worry about forgetting paper when I go shopping.

× I directly went to the shop and buy the things what I like and.

✓ I directly went to the shop and bought the things that I liked.

The sentence mixes past tense 'went' with present tense 'buy' and 'like'. To maintain tense consistency, 'buy' should be changed to past tense 'bought' and 'like' to past tense 'liked'. Also, 'what' is incorrectly used; 'that' is the correct relative pronoun here.

× I directly went to the shop and buy the things what I like and.

✓ I directly went to the shop and bought the things that I liked.

'What' is incorrectly used as a relative pronoun. The correct relative pronoun to refer to 'things' is 'that'.

× some people like, does not like to make list because, uh, they know.

✓ some people do not like to make lists because, uh, they know.

'Does not like' is incorrect here because the subject is 'some people' (plural). The correct form is 'do not like'. Also, 'make list' should be 'make lists' to match plural form.

× some people like, does not like to make list because, uh, they know.

✓ some people do not like to make lists because, uh, they know.

'List' should be plural 'lists' because it refers to the general activity of making lists, which is countable and plural in this context.

× I prefer to make list on my phone because sometimes, uh, we, we forgot to bring the paper with us and it makes use difficulties and sometimes the phone is easy way to convenient and easy way.

✓ I prefer to make lists on my phone because sometimes, uh, we forget to bring paper with us and it causes us difficulties. Also, the phone is a convenient and easy way.

'Make list' should be 'make lists' for plural consistency. 'Forgot' should be present tense 'forget' to match 'sometimes'. 'The paper' should be 'paper' without 'the' as it is uncountable here. 'Makes use difficulties' is incorrect; it should be 'causes us difficulties'. 'Easy way to convenient and easy way' is awkward; corrected to 'a convenient and easy way'.