List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答不够自然，语法错误较多，表达不够清晰。建议使用完整句子，直接回答问题，并用连接词丰富内容。

例: Yes, I usually make a list when I go shopping because it helps me remember everything I need and avoid buying unnecessary items.

提案: 回答内容较丰富，但语法和表达不够准确。建议简化句子结构，使用连接词使表达更流畅。

例: As a student, I always make a study list because it saves time and helps me concentrate better on my tasks.

提案: 回答不完整且表达不清晰。建议完整表达观点，提供具体原因，并使用连接词。

例: Some people dislike making lists because they find it restrictive and prefer to be more spontaneous in their daily activities.

提案: 回答简洁明了，但可以增加细节使内容更丰富。建议补充原因和个人体验。

例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it's more convenient and I can easily edit or add items anytime.

× Yes, I make.

✓ Yes, I do.

这里的回答是对一般现在时问题的肯定回答，应该用助动词'do'来代替单独的动词'make'，因为英语中一般现在时的肯定回答通常用'do'。

× I made a list when I shop because I'm a person.

✓ I make a list when I shop because I'm a person.

这里描述的是习惯性动作，应该用一般现在时'make'而不是过去时'made'。

× Like prepare for many things before I made a decision.

✓ Like preparing for many things before I make a decision.

句子中'Like'后面应该接动名词'preparing'，而且前后时态要一致，使用一般现在时'make'。

× I think it save my time and efficiently help me improve my study and make me more concentrate on my study.

✓ I think it saves my time and efficiently helps me improve my study and makes me more concentrated on my study.

主语是第三人称单数，动词需要加's'，'concentrate'应使用形容词形式'concentrated'。

× I think these people may think making lists will.

✓ I think these people may think making lists is unnecessary.

原句不完整，缺少谓语部分，导致句子结构错误，需要补充完整的谓语部分。