List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答中存在语法错误，如“when I shopping”应为“when I shop”，且表达重复（"based on based on"）。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并注意时态和动词形式的正确使用。

例: To be honest, I don't usually make a list when I shop. I prefer to buy things based on my needs at the moment, which makes shopping more flexible and interesting.

提案: 回答中语法错误较多，如“have the habit of make”应为“have the habit of making”，且表达不够清晰。建议使用更准确的表达，明确说明制作清单的目的和效果。

例: I don't usually make lists when shopping, but I do make lists when I study. They help me keep track of my tasks and goals, which improves my study efficiency.

提案: 回答不连贯且含糊，缺乏具体内容和逻辑。建议先明确表达观点，然后用具体理由支持，避免语无伦次。

例: Some people may not like making lists because they find it restrictive or time-consuming. They might prefer to be more spontaneous in managing their tasks.

提案: 回答中有词汇错误，如“van”应为“phone”，“make lease”应为“make lists”。建议注意词汇准确性，并简化表达，使句子更自然流畅。

例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because I always have it with me, so I can easily check my goals and schedule. If I use paper, I might lose the list.

× I don't have the habit of making this when I shopping.

✓ I don't have the habit of making this when I am shopping.

动词短语中，'when I shopping'缺少助动词，正确形式应为'when I am shopping'，表示正在进行的动作。

× Although I don't have the habit of make list when I shopping, I have the habit of make this when I study because it can directly note what should I do and my target and it can improve the factory of my study.

✓ Although I don't have the habit of making lists when I shop, I have the habit of making them when I study because it can directly note what I should do and my target, and it can improve the efficiency of my study.

动词后应使用动名词形式'making'，'make list'应为'making lists'，'when I shopping'应为'when I shop'。此外，'factory'应为'efficiency'，表示效率。

× Although I don't have the habit of make list when I shopping, I have the habit of make this when I study because it can directly note what should I do and my target and it can improve the factory of my study.

✓ Although I don't have the habit of making lists when I shop, I have the habit of making them when I study because it can directly note what I should do and my target, and it can improve the efficiency of my study.

'make this'中的'this'指代不明确，改为'them'指代前文的'lists'更合适。

× it can directly note what should I do and my target

✓ it can directly note what I should do and my target

间接疑问句中，语序应为'what I should do'，而不是'what should I do'。

× I prefer to make this on my phone because you know my van always follow me and I can check my goals and my schedule on the phone.

✓ I prefer to make this on my phone because, you know, my phone always follows me and I can check my goals and my schedule on the phone.

原句中'my van'应为'my phone'，且动词'follow'应加第三人称单数形式'follows'。

× my van always follow me

✓ my phone always follows me

主语是第三人称单数，动词应加-s，'follow'改为'follows'。

× But if I make lease on a paper I'm I think I've lost it easily.

✓ But if I make a list on paper, I think I'll lose it easily.

'make lease'应为'make a list'，'on a paper'应为'on paper'，'I'm I think I've lost it easily'语序混乱，改为'I think I'll lose it easily'更通顺。