List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答表达了观点，但句子结构较简单，且有些表达不够自然。建议使用更地道的表达方式，并且可以增加一些具体细节来丰富答案。

例: Yes, I usually make a shopping list because it helps me save time and avoid buying unnecessary items.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误，如时态和主谓一致问题。建议注意语法准确性，同时可以用连接词使句子更连贯。

例: Yes, I make a to-do list every morning before work, and it really helps me stay organized and ensures I don't forget any important tasks.

提案: 回答中有重复和语法错误，表达不够清晰。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并使用连接词使表达更流畅。

例: Some people dislike making lists because they think it takes extra time, but actually, it can help them save time in the long run.

提案: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不够清楚。建议简化表达，使用正确的时态和词汇，并提供具体原因。

例: I prefer making lists on paper because writing by hand helps me remember things better and it's more convenient for me.

× I think the people who didn't want to making list that that is because they don't want to spend any more extra, extra more time on making list.

✓ I think the people who don't want to make lists, that is because they don't want to spend any extra time making lists.

这里动词后面不应该用动名词形式making，而应该用动词原形make，因为前面有助动词don't。并且list应使用复数形式lists。句子中any more extra, extra more时间表达重复，应简化为any extra time。

× I think the people who didn't want to making list that that is because they don't want to spend any more extra, extra more time on making list.

✓ I think the people who don't want to make lists, that is because they don't want to spend any extra time making lists.

list应使用复数形式lists，因为这里指的是一般的列表，不是特指一个列表。

× Yes, I will make a list every day before I work and that do really helps a lot and it prevent forgetting something I should do in that day.

✓ Yes, I make a list every day before I work and that really helps a lot and it prevents me from forgetting something I should do that day.

这里用will表示将来时不合适，应使用一般现在时make，因为是习惯动作。助动词do用法错误，应去掉。动词prevent后应加宾语me，并用第三人称单数形式prevents。

× Yes, I will make a list every day before I work and that do really helps a lot and it prevent forgetting something I should do in that day.

✓ Yes, I make a list every day before I work and that really helps a lot and it prevents me from forgetting something I should do that day.

主语that是第三人称单数，谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式helps和prevents，而不是do和prevent。

× Yes, I do make a list when I shop because I don't want to spend too much time on shopping around.

✓ Yes, I do make a list when I shop because I don't want to spend too much time shopping around.

动词spend后直接跟时间状语，不需要介词on。

× Well, I prefer making lists with my hands, pencil and papers.

✓ Well, I prefer making lists with my hands, a pencil, and paper.

my hands是复数，pencil前应加不定冠词a，papers应改为不可数名词paper。

× Not that is because they were that was totally original behavior, behavior from the starting point where where I learning new things.

✓ Not that, it is because that was totally original behavior from the starting point where I learned new things.

句子结构混乱，重复使用that和where。动词learning应改为过去式learned。

× Not that is because they were that was totally original behavior, behavior from the starting point where where I learning new things.

✓ Not that, it is because that was totally original behavior from the starting point where I learned new things.

描述过去的行为时，动词应使用过去式learned，而不是现在分词learning。

× Not that is because they were that was totally original behavior, behavior from the starting point where where I learning new things.

✓ Not that, it is because that was totally original behavior from the starting point where I learned new things.

句子结构混乱，重复使用that和where，导致表达不清，应简化句子结构。