List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is relevant but could be more natural and concise. Avoid filler words like 'uh' and improve sentence structure for clarity. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and provide specific reasons why making a list helps you.

例: Yes, I always make a shopping list on my phone because it helps me shop quickly and efficiently. For example, I check off items as I buy them, which saves time and ensures I don't forget anything.

提案: Your response addresses the question but can be improved by reducing hesitation and improving grammar. Use linking words to explain how the list helps you avoid mistakes and be more specific about the benefits.

例: Yes, I make a list at work, especially on Sundays when I do inventory. This list helps me keep track of all items in the store, so I avoid mistakes and complete the task efficiently.

提案: Try to avoid repeating the question and filler words. Provide a clearer opinion with specific reasons why some people avoid making lists. Use linking words to organize your ideas logically.

例: Some people dislike making lists because they find it stressful or time-consuming. However, I believe making lists is important as it helps organize tasks and reduces the chance of forgetting important things.

提案: Your answer is clear but could be more concise and natural. Avoid repetition and improve sentence structure. Use linking words to explain advantages of using a phone over paper for lists.

例: I prefer making lists on my phone because I always have it with me, unlike paper which I might forget. Also, I can easily check off items as I buy them, which is not possible with paper lists.

× When I went to any store, I always, uh, open my notes in my mobile phone and I am marking each of the things which I am buying.

✓ When I go to any store, I always open my notes on my mobile phone and mark each of the things I am buying.

The sentence mixes past tense 'went' with present tense actions 'open' and 'am marking'. To maintain consistency and reflect habitual action, use present tense 'go', 'open', and 'mark'.

× And after that, it will be save my time as well as, uh, I never forgot anything when I'm doing shopping.

✓ And after that, it will save my time as well as, uh, I never forget anything when I'm shopping.

The phrase 'will be save' is incorrect; it should be 'will save' as 'save' is the base form after 'will'. Also, 'never forgot' is past tense, but the context suggests a habitual action, so 'never forget' is appropriate.

× I always, uh, make a list of each things which is present on my store, which will be helpful in my inventory.

✓ I always make a list of each thing which is present in my store, which will be helpful in my inventory.

'Each' should be followed by a singular noun 'thing' not plural 'things'. Also, 'on my store' should be 'in my store' (see next correction).

× I always, uh, make a list of each things which is present on my store, which will be helpful in my inventory.

✓ I always make a list of each thing which is present in my store, which will be helpful in my inventory.

The correct preposition is 'in' when referring to items inside a store, not 'on'.

× I never did any mistake, uh, with the help of the list.

✓ I never make any mistakes with the help of the list.

'Did any mistake' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'make any mistakes'. Also, since the context is habitual, present tense 'make' is appropriate.

× The main reason, uh, to not making the list, uh, is that, uh, they don't wanna do give stress on their work.

✓ The main reason for not making the list is that they don't want to put stress on their work.

'To not making' is incorrect; it should be 'for not making'. Also, 'wanna do give stress' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'want to put stress'.

× That's why maybe, but it's not a good habit if persons are not making the rest.

✓ That's why maybe, but it's not a good habit if people are not making the list.

'Persons' is less common and 'rest' is incorrect here; the intended word is 'list'. 'People' is the correct plural noun.

× I always prefer to make a list on my phone because sometimes I forgot paper at my home but phone I never forgot at home.

✓ I always prefer to make a list on my phone because sometimes I forget paper at home but I never forget my phone at home.

'Forgot' is past tense; since the context is habitual, 'forget' in present tense is correct. Also, 'my home' is better as 'home' and 'phone I never forgot' should be 'I never forget my phone'. Also added 'my' before phone for clarity.

× Apart from it, I also marking on the phone which thing I already bought but on the paper it can't be happen, I should.

✓ Apart from that, I also mark on the phone which things I have already bought, but on paper, it can't happen.

'Apart from it' should be 'Apart from that'. 'I also marking' is incorrect; it should be 'I also mark'. 'Which thing' should be 'which things'. 'It can't be happen' is incorrect; correct form is 'it can't happen'. The phrase 'I should' at the end is incomplete and unclear, so it is omitted.