List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Try to avoid repetition and hesitations such as "not not" and "a a". Also, organise your answer more clearly by starting with a direct response, then adding specific details with linking words to improve coherence. For example, use phrases like "Sometimes I rely on my memory; however, when I want to be thorough, I check my cupboards and fridge before making a list."

例: Sometimes I make a list when I shop, but not always. For instance, I often rely on my memory to remember what I need. However, if I want to be more organised, I check my cupboards and fridge first, then write a list either on my phone or on paper.

提案: Reduce filler words like "umm" and be more concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, then explain why you make lists and how they help you, using linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

例: I usually make a list for work because it helps me stay organised. Although I don't make one every day, especially when I'm focused on a single task, lists generally ensure I know what to do and keep me on track.

提案: Avoid dismissive or unclear answers. Instead, try to give a thoughtful opinion with reasons or examples. Use linking words to structure your answer logically.

例: Some people might not like making lists because they find them restrictive or time-consuming. Additionally, they may prefer to rely on memory or feel that lists reduce spontaneity.

提案: Try to avoid hesitations and unclear phrases like "Was like". Begin with a clear preference, then explain reasons using linking words to make your answer coherent and specific.

例: I usually prefer to make lists on paper because it helps me keep a record for the next day. However, for everyday tasks, I sometimes use my phone since it's more convenient when I'm on the go.

× Not not all the time.

✓ Not all the time.

The phrase 'Not not all the time' contains a repeated negation which is unnecessary and incorrect in this context. Removing the extra 'not' corrects the sentence structure and clarifies the meaning.

× Sometimes I just go in and use my memory to see if I can get everything I need.

✓ Sometimes I just go in and use my memory to check if I can get everything I need.

The verb 'see' is less appropriate here; 'check' better fits the context of verifying or confirming items. This improves clarity and correctness in prepositional usage.

× And then sometimes I look home and look in the cup and look in the fridge and actually make a a proper list.

✓ And then sometimes I look at home and look in the cupboard and look in the fridge and actually make a proper list.

The phrase 'look home' is incorrect; it should be 'look at home' to indicate searching within the home. Also, 'cup' is likely a mishearing or typo for 'cupboard', which is the correct noun for kitchen storage. Correct prepositions and nouns improve sentence accuracy.

× Normally they write it down on my phone or make a paper list.

✓ Normally I write it down on my phone or make a paper list.

The pronoun 'they' is incorrect here as the speaker refers to themselves. Changing 'they' to 'I' corrects the subject and ensures subject-verb agreement.

× Was like I normally make a list on paper, but I do occasionally use my phone to make a list.

✓ I normally make a list on paper, but I do occasionally use my phone to make a list.

The phrase 'Was like' is an incorrect use of pronouns and sentence structure. Removing it clarifies the sentence and corrects the pronoun usage.