List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答表达了主要意思，但存在语法错误和表达不够自然的问题。建议注意动词时态和单复数形式的正确使用，同时避免重复和冗余表达。可以尝试用更简洁流畅的句子表达观点。

例: Yes, I always make a shopping list before going to the supermarket because it helps me remember everything I need and shop more efficiently without forgetting important items.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不完整的问题，导致意思不清晰。建议在回答时完整表达观点，避免断句和重复，同时使用连接词使句子更连贯。

例: Yes, I usually make a list for my work because it helps me organize my tasks for exams. This method saves me time and makes my work more efficient.

提案: 回答基本表达了原因，但有语法错误和重复词汇。建议注意句子结构和词汇的准确使用，同时可以用连接词使表达更流畅。

例: Some people don't like making lists because they find it difficult and prefer to keep their plans flexible instead of following a strict schedule.

提案: 回答较为自然且表达清晰，但可以使用更多连接词使句子更连贯，同时丰富词汇表达。

例: I prefer to make a list on my phone because it's more convenient to access anytime. Moreover, since I always carry my phone, I never forget my list when I go shopping.

× Yes, I make a shopping list before I go to the supermarket because it help me remember everything I need to buy or this way I can show more efficiently and forgetting anything important.

✓ Yes, I make a shopping list before I go to the supermarket because it helps me remember everything I need to buy, and this way I can shop more efficiently and not forget anything important.

主语是单数it，谓语动词help应加-s变为helps，表示第三人称单数。句中also存在句子结构问题，使用and连接两个并列句更合适。forgetting用法错误，应使用not forget表示否定。建议注意主谓一致和动词形式的正确使用。

× Yes, I make a shopping list before I go to the supermarket because it help me remember everything I need to buy or this way I can show more efficiently and forgetting anything important.

✓ Yes, I make a shopping list before I go to the supermarket because it helps me remember everything I need to buy, and this way I can shop more efficiently and not forget anything important.

原句中or连接两个不相关的内容，导致句子结构混乱，应使用and连接两个并列句。forgetting用法错误，应改为not forget。建议理清句子逻辑，使用正确的连接词。

× Yes, I usually make a list for my work because it helps me to organize my tests for exams. It also saves me. It also saves my time by remaining.

✓ Yes, I usually make a list for my work because it helps me to organize my tasks for exams. It also saves me time by reminding me.

原句中It also saves me.不完整，缺少宾语。remaining用词错误，应为reminding，表示提醒。tests应为tasks，符合语境。建议注意词汇选择和句子完整性。

× Some people don't like making this because they they think it's difficult for them and they prefer to keep something flexible rather than following a strict plan.

✓ Some people don't like making lists because they think it's difficult for them and they prefer to keep things flexible rather than follow a strict plan.

this指代不明确，应改为lists。重复使用they。keep something flexible不自然，应为keep things flexible。following改为follow，保持动词形式一致。建议注意代词指代和动词形式。

× I prefer to make a list on my phone because it's more convenient to read anytime. Also, my phone is always with me so I never forget my list when I go shopping.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because it's more convenient to read at any time. Also, my phone is always with me, so I never forget my list when I go shopping.

anytime应为at any time，表示任何时候。句中缺少逗号，连接两个独立分句时应加逗号。建议注意介词短语和标点符号的正确使用。