List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is clear but can be more natural and concise. Avoid redundancy such as "I can know what I need" and "buy essential things" which overlap. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. Also, improve vocabulary by replacing "lessen the money use" with a more natural phrase.

例: Yes, I always make a shopping list because it helps me focus on buying only the essentials, which saves money and prevents unnecessary purchases.

提案: Your answer addresses the question well but can be improved by correcting grammar and making sentences more fluent. Avoid repeating similar ideas and use linking words to connect points logically.

例: Yes, I usually make a to-do list before work, prioritizing tasks so I can manage my time efficiently and ensure I don't forget anything important.

提案: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Use clearer vocabulary and sentence structures. Explain your opinion directly and provide a specific example. Avoid vague words like "mechanism" in this context.

例: I think some people dislike making lists because it depends on their personality and work habits. For instance, I tend to forget things easily, so making lists helps me remember important tasks.

提案: Your answer has grammar mistakes and unclear phrases. Make your sentences complete and coherent. Use linking words to connect ideas and improve vocabulary for clarity.

例: I prefer making lists on my phone because it is lighter and more convenient to carry than paper. Also, it's easier to check and update my tasks anytime.

× Yes, I will make a list whenever I go shopping.

✓ Yes, I make a list whenever I go shopping.

The use of 'will' here is incorrect because the sentence describes a habitual action, so the simple present tense should be used instead of the future tense modal 'will'.

× This method allows me to buy essential things instead of unnecessary things so that I can know what I need and also lessen the money use.

✓ This method allows me to buy essential things instead of unnecessary ones so that I can know what I need and also reduce my spending.

The phrase 'lessen the money use' is awkward and incorrect. 'Unnecessary things' can be replaced with 'unnecessary ones' to avoid repetition. 'Reduce my spending' is a clearer and more natural expression.

× Yes, I usually make A to do list before I go to work by arranging different tasks based on their priority.

✓ Yes, I usually make a to-do list before I go to work by arranging different tasks based on their priority.

The article 'A' should be lowercase 'a' and 'to do list' should be hyphenated as 'to-do list' to be grammatically correct.

× This allows me to spend my time wisely and also by using this method this ensures I don't forget anything.

✓ This allows me to spend my time wisely and ensures I don't forget anything.

The original sentence is awkward and redundant. 'By using this method' is unnecessary because 'this' already refers to the method. The sentence should be simplified for clarity and correctness.

× In my opinion, I think mechanism is really depends on the person's personality and their working style.

✓ In my opinion, I think the mechanism really depends on the person's personality and their working style.

The noun 'mechanism' is singular and requires the definite article 'the'. Also, 'depends' should not be preceded by 'is' here; the correct verb form is 'depends' to agree with the singular subject.

× For example, like me, I'm quite a forgetfulness person, so by making a list, this can remind me of the essential duties too.

✓ For example, like me, I'm quite a forgetful person, so by making a list, it can remind me of the essential duties too.

'Forgetfulness' is a noun, but an adjective 'forgetful' is needed to describe 'person'. Also, 'this' is vague; 'it' refers better to 'making a list'. These changes improve grammatical correctness and clarity.

× I prefer making at least using my phone as phone is lighter than using a notebook or paper.

✓ I prefer making lists at least using my phone as the phone is lighter than using a notebook or paper.

The sentence is missing the object 'lists' after 'making'. Also, 'phone' needs the definite article 'the' when referring to a specific phone. These corrections improve sentence clarity and grammar.

× Also using your is easier to carry and easy to check anything you need to do.

✓ Also, using your phone is easier to carry and easy to check anything you need to do.

The pronoun 'your' is incomplete without a noun. Adding 'phone' after 'your' clarifies the meaning and corrects the pronoun usage.