List— Part 1 採点レポート
会話
Part 1
試験官
Do you make a list when you shop?
受験者
Yes, I often make a list before going to a supermarket or a shopping complex. Whenever I go for my household groceries, I usually make a list in my phone in the app that is called Notes in my iPhone.
試験官
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
受験者
I usually try to make a list for a scheduled routine as it enhances my productivity and I stay very much firm about my goals. At the same time, it helps me to do my work at proper time.
試験官
Why don't some people like making lists?
受験者
Making list is, uh, is varies from person to person according to my opinion. Some people don't try or like to make list because of their lethargic nature. At the same time they are so unorganized.
試験官
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
受験者
As we are moving towards the technological era and many of the astonishing features have given in the phone. So I basically use my phone in which the notes app is given. I make list over there.
評価
総合
Part 1
Do you make a list when you shop?
スコア: 75.0提案: Your answer is generally clear and relevant, but it could be more concise and natural. Avoid repeating similar ideas and try to use linking words to improve coherence. For example, you could combine the sentences and add a reason for making a list.
例: Yes, I usually make a shopping list on the Notes app on my iPhone before going to the supermarket because it helps me remember everything I need.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
スコア: 70.0提案: Your answer addresses the question but could be more natural and structured. Use linking words like 'because' or 'so' to connect ideas and avoid awkward phrases such as 'stay very much firm'. Also, try to be more specific about how the list helps you.
例: Yes, I make lists to organise my daily tasks because they improve my productivity and help me complete my work on time.
Why don't some people like making lists?
スコア: 60.0提案: Your answer has some grammar mistakes and unclear expressions. Avoid filler words like 'uh' and improve sentence structure. Also, try to give more specific reasons and use linking words to connect ideas logically.
例: In my opinion, some people dislike making lists because they are unmotivated and prefer a more spontaneous approach to their tasks, which can make them less organised.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
スコア: 65.0提案: Your answer is understandable but could be more natural and concise. Avoid awkward phrases like 'have given in the phone' and use linking words properly. Also, directly state your preference and explain why.
例: I prefer making lists on my phone because it is convenient and has useful features like the Notes app that help me organise my tasks easily.
文法
× Making list is, uh, is varies from person to person according to my opinion.
✓ Making lists varies from person to person according to my opinion.
The noun 'list' should be plural 'lists' because the sentence refers to the general concept of making lists, not a single list. Also, 'is varies' is incorrect; 'varies' alone is sufficient as the verb.
× Some people don't try or like to make list because of their lethargic nature.
✓ Some people don't try or like to make lists because of their lethargic nature.
The noun 'list' should be plural 'lists' because it refers to the general action of making lists, not a single list.
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