List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Ваш ответ понятен, но есть ошибки в грамматике и повторения. Постарайтесь использовать связующие слова и более разнообразную лексику, чтобы сделать ответ более естественным и связным.

例: Yes, I always make a list when I go shopping because it helps me find the products quickly and avoid forgetting anything. For example, last week I made a list before going to the supermarket, which saved me a lot of time.

提案: Ответ содержит грамматические ошибки и повторения, а также не раскрывает причину отказа от списков. Рекомендуется объяснить свое мнение более подробно и использовать связующие слова.

例: Actually, I don't make lists for my work because I prefer to keep things flexible. I believe that making a list might limit my creativity and spontaneity during work.

提案: Ответ слишком короткий и не раскрывает тему. Попробуйте предположить причины и использовать связующие слова для расширения ответа.

例: Some people might not like making lists because they find it boring or time-consuming. Also, they may prefer to remember tasks mentally rather than writing them down.

提案: Ответ содержит грамматические ошибки и повторения. Рекомендуется использовать более точные выражения и связующие слова для улучшения связности.

例: I prefer making lists on my phone because it is very convenient and easy to use. For instance, I often use the Notes app, which helps me organize my tasks efficiently.

× That's why I usually make a list when I'm a shop.

✓ That's why I usually make a list when I'm shopping.

The phrase 'when I'm a shop' is incorrect because 'shop' is a noun here, but the intended meaning is the action of shopping, which requires the verb form 'shopping'. Using the present participle 'shopping' correctly expresses the ongoing action.

× I don't like make a list.

✓ I don't like to make a list.

After 'like', the verb should be in the infinitive form 'to make' or the gerund form 'making'. Here, 'to make' is more appropriate. Omitting 'to' before 'make' is incorrect.

× I think it's it is not a good idea for make a list for my work.

✓ I think it is not a good idea to make a list for my work.

The phrase 'for make' is incorrect; after 'idea', the verb should be in the infinitive form 'to make'. Using 'to' before the verb is necessary to express purpose or intention.

× That's why I don't list for my work.

✓ That's why I don't make a list for my work.

The verb 'list' is not used alone in this context. The correct phrase is 'make a list'. Omitting 'make' changes the meaning and is grammatically incorrect.

× I prefer more make list on my phone because it's a quite convenient and easy to find easy to use.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because it's quite convenient and easy to use.

The phrase 'prefer more make list' is incorrect. The correct structure is 'prefer to make a list'. Also, 'a quite convenient' is incorrect; 'quite' is an adverb modifying 'convenient' and does not need an article 'a'. The phrase 'easy to find easy to use' is redundant and unclear; 'easy to use' suffices.

× For example when I make a list I use my phone app notice notes app and it's my one of the best app on my phone and I usually use it.

✓ For example, when I make a list, I use the Notes app on my phone; it's one of the best apps I have, and I usually use it.

The phrase 'my phone app notice notes app' is unclear and ungrammatical. The correct expression is 'the Notes app on my phone'. Also, 'my one of the best app' is incorrect; it should be 'one of the best apps I have'. Proper articles and plural forms are necessary here.