List— Part 1 採点レポート
会話
Part 1
試験官
Do you make a list when you shop?
受験者
No, usually I don't create any shopping list because the place where I live there are many local supermarkets, so whenever I want any product I just go to one of the local department stores and buy the item.
試験官
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
受験者
No, I don't prepare any checklists for my works because currently I'm not working and whenever I tried making lists I ended up not following the list.
試験官
Why don't some people like making lists?
受験者
Well, I think most individuals don't fancy creating any checklists because it is very hard to foresee the future and plan what to do tomorrow. So eventually people end up not following the list.
試験官
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
受験者
I prefer to prepare the checklist To Do List on my mobile phone because I carry my phone with me every day and I use my device for like for five hours every day. So whenever I need to check my plans and routines, it's very easy.
評価
総合
Part 1
Do you make a list when you shop?
スコア: 75.0提案: Your answer is clear but a bit long and slightly redundant. Try to make your response more concise and use linking words to improve coherence. Also, avoid repeating similar ideas. For example, you can start with a direct answer and then briefly explain your reason.
例: No, I usually don't make a shopping list because there are many local supermarkets nearby. So, I just go to a store whenever I need something.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
スコア: 80.0提案: Your answer is relevant and clear, but it can be improved by separating ideas into two sentences and using linking words to connect them. Also, avoid minor grammar mistakes like 'works' instead of 'work'.
例: No, I don't prepare checklists for my work because I am currently not working. Besides, when I tried making lists before, I often didn't follow them.
Why don't some people like making lists?
スコア: 85.0提案: Good answer with clear reasoning and linking words. To improve, try to use more varied vocabulary and provide a more specific example or consequence to enrich your response.
例: I think many people dislike making lists because it's difficult to predict the future and plan ahead. As a result, they often ignore their lists, which makes the effort seem pointless.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
スコア: 80.0提案: Your answer is clear but a bit repetitive and slightly informal ('like for five hours'). Try to be more concise and formal, and use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.
例: I prefer making lists on my phone because I carry it everywhere and use it frequently. Therefore, it's easy to check my plans and routines anytime.
文法
× No, I don't prepare any checklists for my works because currently I'm not working and whenever I tried making lists I ended up not following the list.
✓ No, I don't prepare any checklists for my work because currently I'm not working and whenever I tried making lists I ended up not following the list.
The word 'works' is incorrect in this context because 'work' as an uncountable noun refers to employment or tasks in general. Using 'works' implies multiple separate jobs or pieces, which is not intended here. Therefore, 'work' should be singular and uncountable.
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