List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答表达了主要观点，但句子结构稍显简单，且部分表达不够地道。建议使用更自然的表达方式，并注意语法，如“help stay with my budget”应为“help me stick to my budget”。

例: Yes, I usually make a shopping list to make sure I don't forget any essential items. It also helps me stick to my budget and avoid impulse purchases.

提案: 回答内容清晰，但可以通过使用连接词使句子更流畅，例如在两句之间加上“and”。另外，“concentrate on my task”可以更具体。

例: Yes, I make a list for my work because it helps me focus on each task, and when I check off completed items, I feel a sense of accomplishment.

提案: 句子中存在语法错误，如“making a list take”应为“making a list takes”。建议使用更自然的表达，并增加连接词使句子更连贯。

例: Some people might not like making lists because they think it takes too much time, and they would rather spend that time actually starting their tasks.

提案: 回答表达了观点，但部分表达不够地道，如“make a reminder or notification to something important”应改为“set reminders or notifications for important things”。建议使用更自然的表达方式。

例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because I always have it with me, so it's more convenient. Plus, I can set reminders or notifications for important tasks.

× They may think making a list take a lot of time and they prefer to take this time into starting their tasks instead.

✓ They may think making a list takes a lot of time and they prefer to take this time to start their tasks instead.

主语是单数形式的动名词短语'making a list'，谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式'takes'，而不是'take'。此外，'take this time into starting'表达不正确，应改为'take this time to start'。

× They may think making a list take a lot of time and they prefer to take this time into starting their tasks instead.

✓ They may think making a list takes a lot of time and they prefer to take this time to start their tasks instead.

短语'take this time into starting'中的介词使用错误，正确表达应为'take this time to start'，表示利用这段时间去做某事。

× I can make a reminder or notification to something important.

✓ I can set a reminder or notification for something important.

动词'make'与'reminder'或'notification'搭配不当，通常用'set'。此外，介词'to'用法错误，正确应为'for'，表示提醒的对象。