List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答中有语法错误，如“don't like make”应为“don't like to make”，以及“ship”应为“shop”。句子结构不够自然，且表达重复。建议简化句子，直接回答问题，并用连词连接原因，使表达更流畅。

例: No, I don't like to make a list when I shop because I usually go to a nearby supermarket, so I can easily remember what to buy.

提案: 回答中语法不够准确，如“what should I do tomorrow”应为“what I should do tomorrow”。句子较简单，缺少连贯的连接词。建议使用更自然的表达，并补充细节说明效果如何。

例: Yes, I usually make a list for my work because it helps me remember the tasks I need to complete the next day, which improves my productivity.

提案: 回答中时态错误，“was”应为“is”，且表达不够清晰，“do the list things”不自然。建议使用更准确的词汇和句型，表达原因时用连词连接。

例: I think some people find making lists boring, and they often forget to follow the tasks on the list.

提案: 句子结构混乱，语法错误较多，如“which when I forgot to do name”不通顺。建议简化句子，明确表达偏好和原因，使用正确的连接词。

例: I prefer to make a list on my phone because it can remind me to check it, especially when I forget to do something.

× No, because I don't like make a list when I ship and because I often go to the supermarket to buy things and the supermarket is not far from my house.

✓ No, because I don't like making a list when I shop and because I often go to the supermarket to buy things and the supermarket is not far from my house.

动词 'like' 后面应该接动名词形式，因此 'make' 应改为 'making'。另外，'ship' 是拼写错误，应为 'shop'。

× No, because I don't like make a list when I ship and because I often go to the supermarket to buy things and the supermarket is not far from my house.

✓ No, because I don't like making a list when I shop and because I often go to the supermarket to buy things and the supermarket is not far from my house.

这里 'ship' 是拼写错误，正确的代词应为 'shop'，表示购物。

× Yes, I usually like to make a list for my work because I hope it can remind me what should I do tomorrow.

✓ Yes, I usually like to make a list for my work because I hope it can remind me what I should do tomorrow.

在宾语从句中，助动词 'should' 后的主语和谓语顺序应为 'I should do'，而不是 'should I do'。

× I think it was boring and they often forget to do the list things.

✓ I think it is boring and they often forget to do the list things.

这里描述的是一般事实或习惯，时态应使用一般现在时 'is'，而不是过去时 'was'。

× I think it was boring and they often forget to do the list things.

✓ I think it is boring and they often forget to do the list things.

这里 'it' 指代前文内容，时态应保持一致，使用 'is' 更合适。

× I prefer to make a list on my phone because it can remind me to check it which when I forgot to do name.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because it can remind me to check it when I forget to do something.

'which when I forgot to do name' 结构不正确，应改为 'when I forget to do something'，且时态应为一般现在时。

× I prefer to make a list on my phone because it can remind me to check it which when I forgot to do name.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because it can remind me to check it when I forget to do something.

这里描述的是习惯动作，时态应使用一般现在时 'forget'，而不是过去时 'forgot'。