List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is unclear and does not directly respond to the question. To improve, provide a clear and complete sentence that directly answers the question, such as 'Yes, I usually make a list when I shop to stay organized.'

例: Yes, I usually make a list when I shop to ensure I don't forget anything important.

提案: Your answer is confusing and does not address the question. To improve, respond directly with a clear statement about whether you make lists for work and if they are effective, for example, 'Yes, I make lists for my work, and they help me stay focused and complete tasks efficiently.'

例: Yes, I make lists for my work, and they help me stay focused and complete tasks efficiently.

提案: Your answer is incomplete and does not provide any explanation. To improve, give a clear reason with supporting details, such as 'Some people don't like making lists because they find it time-consuming or prefer to remember things mentally.'

例: Some people don't like making lists because they find it time-consuming or prefer to remember things mentally.

提案: Your answer is generally clear and relevant, but it contains some repetition and minor grammatical errors. To improve, avoid repeating words and ensure subject-verb agreement, for example, 'I prefer making lists on my phone because it's always with me, which makes it more convenient. I can easily edit and rearrange items on a digital app, and I can share my list with others.'

例: I prefer making lists on my phone because it's always with me, which makes it more convenient. I can easily edit and rearrange items on a digital app, and I can share my list with others.

× Send.

✓ Yes, I do.

The original response 'Send.' is incomplete and does not answer the question properly. A complete sentence is needed to convey the intended meaning. The corrected sentence 'Yes, I do.' properly answers the question with correct sentence structure.

× I don't know, expert Traviro I love.

✓ I don't know, but I love expert Traviro.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. It lacks proper conjunction and sentence structure. Adding 'but' connects the ideas logically, and rearranging the words clarifies the meaning.

× Oh.

✓ Some people find making lists boring or unnecessary.

The response 'Oh.' is not a complete answer to the question. Providing a full sentence that explains why some people dislike making lists improves clarity and relevance.

× I prefer my lease on my phone because it's it's always with me making it more convenient and I can easily edit and rearrange item on a digital app and I can share it share my list with others through my phone.

✓ I prefer my list on my phone because it's always with me, making it more convenient, and I can easily edit and rearrange items on a digital app, and I can share my list with others through my phone.

The original sentence has a typo 'lease' instead of 'list' and uses the singular 'item' instead of the plural 'items' when referring to multiple entries. Correcting these improves accuracy. Also, removing the repeated 'it's' and adding commas improves readability.