List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is understandable but needs improvement in grammar and clarity. Try to avoid repetition and use linking words to make your answer more natural and effective. For example, instead of saying 'products or or items', just say 'items'. Also, use past tense correctly and connect ideas smoothly.

例: Yes, I usually make a list of items I need to buy because sometimes I forget the main products. Therefore, making a list helps me shop more efficiently.

提案: Your answer has some repetition and awkward phrasing. Try to use clearer sentences and linking words to explain how making lists helps you. Also, avoid repeating words like 'routine' and 'planning'.

例: Yes, I often make a list of my tasks because it helps me organize my daily routine without interruptions. Moreover, it improves my time management.

提案: Your answer is incomplete and has grammatical errors. Try to complete your thoughts and use correct verb tenses. Also, avoid filler words like 'umm' and provide clear reasons with examples.

例: I think some people don't like making lists because they have a good memory and can easily remember a few items. Besides, they may find lists unnecessary when shopping for only a few products.

提案: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical mistakes. Try to express your preference clearly and explain reasons logically using linking words. Avoid confusing phrases and incomplete ideas.

例: I prefer to make a list on my phone because people usually carry their phones everywhere. In contrast, paper lists can be easily lost or forgotten, especially when going out.

× I'm sometimes forgot the main product that I have to buy and making a list helps me for shopping more.

✓ I sometimes forget the main product that I have to buy, and making a list helps me shop more.

The verb 'forgot' is the past tense, but the sentence context requires present tense 'forget' because the action is habitual. Also, 'helps me for shopping more' is incorrect; it should be 'helps me shop more' to use the verb directly after 'helps'.

× making a list helps me for shopping more.

✓ making a list helps me shop more.

The preposition 'for' is unnecessary here. After 'helps me', the base form of the verb should be used directly without 'for'.

× I often make a list of my work because it helps me to organize my plan or daily routine routine continually without any disturbance and also helps me in a time management by making a list of my planning.

✓ I often make a list of my work because it helps me organize my plan or daily routine continually without any disturbance and also helps me manage my time by making a list of my plans.

The conjunction 'and also' is redundant; 'and' suffices. 'Helps me to organize' can be simplified to 'helps me organize'. 'In a time management' is incorrect; it should be 'manage my time'. 'My planning' is better as 'my plans'.

× they were quite good to remember things and it there is a less amount of product to buy they can easily remembered.

✓ they are quite good at remembering things, and if there is a small number of products to buy, they can easily remember them.

'Were' should be 'are' for present ability. 'Good to remember' should be 'good at remembering'. 'It there is' is incorrect; it should be 'if there is'. 'Less amount of product' should be 'small number of products' for countable nouns. 'Can easily remembered' should be 'can easily remember'.

× Beside this there are.

✓ Besides this, there are other reasons.

The sentence is incomplete and lacks a verb and object. 'Beside' should be 'Besides' and a complete sentence is needed.

× every individual don't forget to bring their cell phone whenever they travel or if we make a list in paper sometimes it make it get your snacks or waiting.

✓ Everyone doesn't forget to bring their cell phone whenever they travel, or if we make a list on paper, sometimes it makes you get your snacks or wait.

'Every individual' should be 'Everyone'. 'Don't' should be 'doesn't' for singular subject. 'Make a list in paper' should be 'make a list on paper'. 'It make it get your snacks or waiting' is unclear and corrected to 'it makes you get your snacks or wait'.

× every individual don't forget to bring their cell phone whenever they travel

✓ every individual doesn't forget to bring their cell phone whenever they travel

The subject 'every individual' is singular, so the verb should be 'doesn't' instead of 'don't'.